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Date: August 11, 2017 6:20 pm Title: Prologue: Big (Bad) Byrd Spreads His Wings

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Reviewer: dragonnan Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2017 10:38 am Title: Prologue: Big (Bad) Byrd Spreads His Wings

Oh!! I just read your reply to harakiri that you are in the HTTYD fandom!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! ME TOO!!  I even started a fic!! (though still distressingly in-progress!!)That makes me want to create a thread on the forum for other fans of that franchise!!


Author's Response: YAY!!! :D Yeah, I have been eagerly awaiting more of Asgardsreia ever since you posted the first two chapters lol. I about had a conniption when I saw that you had started writing for HTTYD. I think I pinched myself about five times because it was a dream come true haha! I've only written drabbles and shorts for the series so far (haven't had time for full blown chapter stories with the other fics I'm working on now... plus, I meandered a bit away from the fandom after RTTE season 4 and dove headfirst into the Psych fandom again. But yeah. I ADORE HTTYD, books, movie, show... I'm hooked. What about you? Have you read any of the books? Eeep, this makes me so happy! I'm going to definitely have to get involved with the HTTYD thread now! :D

Reviewer: dragonnan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2017 10:36 am Title: Prologue: Big (Bad) Byrd Spreads His Wings

HOLY CATS!!!!!!! I'm so freaking excited to see this you have no idea!! Like my whole body is FLAILING with utter thrillage and I'm burning to see the next chapter!! I am so freaking in LOVE with this idea!!! I adore Byrd and honestly there are not nearly enough fics that use his character!  I can already tell this will be masterful!!  This part:

He hated people in general, and that generous distaste worked in his favor so that his mind was never clouded with negativity toward one person in particular. Single-minded hatred was a path down a track that almost always led to self-destruction. As far as daddy issues went, he’d never met his, and for that he was glad, because he’d probably have disliked him, too.

PERFECTION!! Absolutely on point describes Byrd to a T! I am also deeply impressed that in roughly 600 words you managed to incorporate perfect motive, character depth, amazing backstory elements, and heart-pounding anticipation!  I think one of the things that especially excites me is that this is set AFTER the final episode!  Like- Byrd shouldn't be on anyone's radar at this point.  He's ancient history - a forgettable character from early in Shawn's Psychic Detective career.  He's met MUCH scarier baddies since then - like Yin and Yang, Garth Longmore and his partner, his dad's evil murderous former partner...  Byrd would barely be a memory for Shawn - even with his perfect recall.  So to have him suddenly turn up again - after all of the growth Shawn has experienced - making a better life - dealing with the fallout of his lie - moving to a new home - proposing... Shawn is, not completely, but certainly a technically more grown up guy than the brash kid that Byrd had first met.  And, yet, that brash kid is the only version of Shawn that Byrd would know.  And, maybe, Byrd wouldn't care anyway.  Because to have such a vendetta, he'd have to have sacrificed growth within himself.  He IS still the same guy he was 5 years ago.  Still angry, and humiliated, and vengeful.  He went to jail a jerk and he's coming out the same jerk.

And I'm really delighted about that, hahaha!!! 



Author's Response: EEEEEEEEE!!! Okay, to get a review this awesome from you made my entire day - no, month... no, my entire YEAR! :D I am an avid FANATIC of pretty much all your stories (still haven't mustered up the courage to read Where There is Wailing and Gnashing of Teeth, but only because the subject matter is something that severely freaks me out lol), and that you're excited about one of my works is beyond exhilarating! Seriously, I'm in the process of re-reading your library of works for the third or fourth time right now. :D Thank you so much for the encouragement and kind words. I was actually planning on having this take place during season 7, after Jules and Shawn got back together and after Jules moved to San Fran, but I'm thinking I'm going to change it to after the finale now, because you just made so many points that made so much sense!! :D Yeah, I'm a huge Keven Sorbo fan in pretty much any role he plays, and I thought his depiction of Byrd was perfect. His performance made it pretty easy to glean all that background/personality information, to be honest. :) Thank you again SO MUCH for the kind words! I'm SO excited about this fic, and glad you are too! XD

Reviewer: harakiri Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2017 2:15 pm Title: Prologue: Big (Bad) Byrd Spreads His Wings

Yes! Brilliant idea! Can't wait to see what you'll do with this. Also: all the Byrd puns. I'm a fan.

(I'm also looking forward to that other story you have planned.)



Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you SO much! :) I am so excited about this story, and the other one I've got planned, so I'm glad you are too! :) As far as puns go: I have a problem. I can't stop making them. The worse, the better. I once wrote an entire fan-fiction in the How to Train Your Dragon fandom that was centered about one little pun I wanted to make. Incidentally, that too was a bird pun, so maybe I've just got a penchant for *fowl* jokes! *snorts* Okay, sorry for subjecting you to that! Thank you so much for the review! :)



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