Reviewer: PineappleHead Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2017 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

A. I cracked up over the line where Shawn's injuries were compared to losing against The Rock.

B. I *loved* the Jeremy Irons reference, especially since Lion King is my favorite movie, and I liked the way that you incorporated Shawn's Simba line into it. :-D Although I will say that Shawn's negativity towards Scar upsets me. :-P :-D

C. The steak knife thing was awesome and creative.

D. I just loved the way Lassie reacted when he found out that Shawn wasn't pressing charges.

Reviewer: harakiri Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2017 12:51 am Title: Chapter 1

Naawwwwwww, a shame you didn't have this ready for the What If challenge deadline! D: Love reading about the early Lassie/Shawn relationship on the show, they're both idiots. XD



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