Date: January 03, 2018 2:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Man! Lassie can't catch a break can he?
I think my favorite part was that for a moment Carlton thought Shawn might actually be psychic with how calm he was with having a gun in his face. (I personally think he's just used to it by now hehe.)
The twist that the waitress was in on it was a great surprise.
I love that once the hostage situation was done, they wanted to go back to eating. LOL.
Author's Response: You know, you're probably right. He's probably just used to it at this point. lol And food is very important; even when someone /actually/ dies, Shawn gets distracted with food, so... you know. :P Thanks for taking the time to read and review!! I'm super happy you enjoyed it!
Date: December 30, 2017 1:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, I must confess that reading your story I found myself snickering - snickering out loud, full Gus style. This is just so incredibly funny, fresh, inventive and Psych-ish - the rhythm perfect, the characters hilarious, Lassie and Shawn' banter absolutely delightful, and the bits of actual police competence and action movie-style episodes so well-done. Also Kim mistaking the boys for a couple had me laughing my ass off - and Juliet biting Shawn's head off in pure Lassiter style while hugging the hell out of him was the cherry on this super tasty sundae of a story.
Author's Response: Aw yay! I'm so happy you liked it!! I try for hitting all of the notes that you pointed out here, so your review makes me fantastically happy. :D Thanks for taking the time to read and review!
Date: December 29, 2017 9:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
So, I loved this fic from the very beginning. The way you set up the introduction was just hilarious.
... a certain consulting “psychic” “detective”—and yes, Lassiter decided, both of those words deserved their own sets of quotation marks—would not enter the picture at all.
SO FUNNY and so very Lassiter!!
And the reason that Shawn is gone is because of a MacGyver marathon. Naturally, Shawn can't stay away from the '80s shows! My heart wanted to jump up and high-five you. Figuratively speaking, because literally, things could get bloody, and, y'know, dead. ;-)
Of *course* Lassiter is sitting in the chair facing the entrance! Perfect little character detail there.
Shawn calling "Heeeeere's Lassie" was perfect, too. I loved the girl interactions between Juliet and Marlowe! And Shawn and Lassie commiserating over women going to the bathroom in packs---that was money, too.
I love the way that Shawn and Lassie work together---or don't. I like the way that Shawn knew that something was off but was just wrong enough to cause trouble. I really enjoyed reading the entire holdup scene. The interactions between Shawn and Kim were great, too, especially the part with her safety being on.
The ending was absolutely perfect, too. Of course, after all that, Lassie is going to act like nothing happened and still want the steak. That's what Lassie does: very calm and rational, arresting people and then moving on with his life. Awesome!
Author's Response: Hahaha I love your review! And I love that you loved the story enough to do so. :) I'm always excited to see the things that other people like about my fics, and I was so happy you loved all the little character details I put in. :D Thank you so much for reading and reviewing; reviews always make my day!!
Date: December 29, 2017 1:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ok, so like I read the title, dropped everything and read the whole story on the spot XD This was so much fun~! I love love love how it's all from Lassie's view. I dunno why, it just totally fit for this story and it wouldn't have been nearly half as good if it had been anybody else.
Although he was often tempted to shoot Spencer himself many days, O’Hara would definitely be upset if Lassiter did anything to get the man injured or killed.
This line KILLED me XDD I just LOVE how detached Lassiter is from any other emotion than, "my partner might get upset if he died . . ." OMG!!!! *rolling on the floor*
Your Lassiter is just so perfect! XD Awesome job~!
Author's Response: Guess that means I nailed it on the title. :D And Lassie is honestly one of my favorites (I *get* him), so I love writing from his perspective. Hehe I'm so excited to hear you enjoyed the story; thank you for taking the time to read and review my little fic!