[Report This]Date: October 06, 2022 7:41 am Title: Rockin' Around the Block
Gus going “Mr Spencer!” cracked me up
Date: May 08, 2018 5:06 pm Title: Rockin' Around the Block
I'm very disappointed we didn't get a fire funeral. XD
Author's Response: Lol, I'm not even sure if catching a rock on fire is possible XD
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2018 2:27 pm Title: Rockin' Around the Block
Oh my gosh! This is the best thing ever!!!! I'm laughing so hard right now.
"Then what do you want to call him?"
"Optimus Prime.”
And then this really killed me:
"You want to kick your dad across the street for the next fifteen minutes?"
*wipes tears of laughter away*
Also:
"You just want to set something on fire, don't you?"
^^Totally me. :P
Thank you for this! It made my day 15 times brighter in the span of just a couple of minutes!!!
Author's Response: No, thank YOU for the lovely review! =D *hugs* You get all da love~ X3 I'm happy my nonsense made you smile!
[Report This]Date: May 06, 2018 9:51 pm Title: Rockin' Around the Block
This is so cute, I love it! I was laughing just as hard as Shawn and Gus were.
I like how this is mostly dialogue over action, the complete opposite of that challenge that you posted XD
Also, this flowed so smoothly, it felt like a totally natural scene between them.
Gus stopped and stared at his friend. "You want to kick your dad across the street for the next fifteen minutes?" Despite the dismay in his tone, he couldn't help fighting off a grin at the idea.
Oh man, you had me cracking up so hard XD
This is so perfect for the Best Buds ficathon! You set a great example for the rest of us.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much~! I really can't thank you enough for both the lovely compliments and all the help =D You're awesome! ^^