Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2019 9:57 pm Title: Dinner with Mom...or maybe not.

Thank you for updating! I love the opening scene! Very cute and one of the best origin stories for his nickname that I have seen. :)

I'm afraid that I do have one teeny tiny criticism for the end of the chapter - I'm not on board with Henry saying to Shawn, "you believe there is a killer stalker on the loose, and you're doing nothing to find them.” Shawn has been trying to do something about it. But (until the autopsy report came back) nobody believed him and tried to stop him from investigating.

Other than that, I am loving this story so much! I love the distraught and obsessed Shawn that you are writing. Awesome job!

Can you tell I'm excited for the next chapter? Lol. :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for your input! I hadn't thought about Henry's line coming across like that before; thanks for bringing that to my attention! :) I am glad you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: Gwen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 01, 2019 10:21 pm Title: Off

Great story so far! Please continue! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story :)



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