Date: April 08, 2009 7:20 pm Title: Uh oh
This story is awesome. I love Andy. I hope that you will finish this.
[Report This]Date: March 03, 2009 9:37 pm Title: Uh oh
Please continue this. The story is absolutely awesome. Continue and take your place among the best.
Date: September 14, 2008 1:59 pm Title: A Trip to the Hospital
lol... the commisioner from Batman hahaha ^-^
Great Chapter!!!!!!
Author's Response: :D thanks!
Date: June 16, 2008 2:53 pm Title: A Stranger and Some Smoothies
I like it, muchly! Your profile says you have writers block, but I'm hoping that getting reviews might help... :)
I love Andy, by the way. She's perfect for Shawn. But I have a question: does she have a photographic memory too? She obviously has better observational skills than a lot of people, but...
Author's Response:
Thanks! And I'm working as hard as I can to try and get past this blockage of my writing. :)
And thanks I love her too :D. But no she doesn't have a photographic memory, she's just extremely observant.
Date: May 18, 2008 10:31 am Title: A Stranger and Some Smoothies
ha... you know james gordon is the name of comissioner gordon from batman, right?! if you did wicked awesome using his name!! and if you didn't you learn something new! but either way! awesome story!!!
[Report This]Date: April 03, 2008 1:48 am Title: Videogames and Surprises
Oh Snap! The ending... so twisty like!
Date: March 31, 2008 7:33 pm Title: Videogames and Surprises
Um...*Nervous laugh*...Surprise?
Wasn't expecting that. But what was with the pretending not to know each other at the crime scene? Weird. Update soon!
Author's Response:
lol. everyone like surprises.... most of the time... except lassie... but he already knew... idk what im saying anymore lol
and the not knowing each other will be explained later... :D
Date: March 31, 2008 4:03 pm Title: Videogames and Surprises
wow!! you just threw a curve ball!!
... no wait...
it was a slider.
great story!!!
^-^
Author's Response: lolol thanks!!! :D