Date: March 04, 2012 4:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
"You suck, Shawn."
"Your face sucks."
That made me laugh. Really hard. Great job!!
[Report This]Date: September 18, 2010 10:01 am Title: Chapter 1
wow... AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! So Shawn broke up with a girl and now is alll depressed about it? cool
[Report This]Date: April 01, 2010 2:26 am Title: Chapter 1
"I heard it sucked."
"It does. You want to watch it tonight?"
Hahaha that is soooo in character for Shawn and Gus- Tacos and a bad movie xD
This was sweet! Good job.
Date: February 18, 2009 7:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
"We’re talking blitzed out, straight up, hardcore, call-Hazmat-because-there’s-a-serious-risk-of-disease-in-here Disaster." Best. Line. Ever.
Seriously, though, Dude, when did you see my house?
I loved this story - perfect dialogue. You could see the entire scene in your head as you read it - great!
Date: May 01, 2008 4:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love the tug-o-war. it's really insightful, and true to the characters. Lovely work.
Date: September 17, 2007 5:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
“You suck, Shawn.”
“Your face sucks.”
This was great. Kinda funny, too.
[Report This]Date: September 07, 2007 12:41 am Title: Chapter 1
OMH&S! DOOD.
HOW DID I MISS THIS LITTLE GEM?
Okay I'll stop with the capitals now. ;D
But srsly, this rocked. So much.
It could not be any more in character. This could have come right out of an episode. Scout's honor.
fave lines:
*insert copy of story here*
No joke.
Now I'm gonna have to go hunt up anything and everything else you've ever written.
What high school did you go to and who was your English teacher? ;D
Once more:
AWESOME! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D::D:D:D:D:D
Maja
[Report This]Date: June 25, 2007 9:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
“I’m keeping V For Vendetta.”
“I heard it sucked.”
“It does. Want to watch it tonight?”
“Yea.”
LOL! I died laughing when I read that because I could totally see those two doing that. This was such a cute story. The dialogue completely rocked.
Date: June 01, 2007 12:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Nice...pretty good...
Date: May 17, 2007 5:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Hey, this was really good. Realistic, and sweet without getting too mushy. You should write more. :)