Date: April 06, 2008 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 4 Embracing the Hurt
Awwwww....so cute!
Author's Response:
lol well thank you, glad you enjoyed it.
Date: April 05, 2008 8:52 pm Title: Chapter 4 Embracing the Hurt
a cute ending :)
Author's Response: oooooo thank you, I didnt want to make it all kisses or something, because honeslty who makes out after esperiencing a bout of severe malnutrition? Not me! And besides I thought I was pushing it with the whole heart to heart thing in the first place and I wanted to keep it believable. So thanks!!
Date: April 05, 2008 6:12 pm Title: Chapter 1 The Sound a Heart Break Makes
Dude, it didn't suck. lol. So stop with the writer's insecurities (which I know about all too well). I know it's tough to put something out there to be read/judged by people you don't know, especially for the first time. Relax. You did a good job :-) You went for something different, which I respect, and you pulled it off.
Author's Response: LOL, o wow I'm kind of geaking out here, I love your stories, but thanks for the much needed slap to the self esteem, I feel duly chastised. And yes it is harder than I thought, this is the first time I've ever done something even remotely like this, I mean I write all the time, I'm a features journalist at my school, and I know I'm good at that but this is sorta different. It's a lot more fun than writing about the top ten bad habits of teenagers or editorialising about something I dont care about like the differance between Target and Wal Mart (and yes I have done all these things, totally not making it up). I'll finish off my ranting with a great big THANK YOU!!!! I feel better about myself now and start on another fic
Date: April 05, 2008 6:08 pm Title: Chapter 4 Embracing the Hurt
that was good
Author's Response: thank you so much
Date: April 04, 2008 9:59 pm Title: Chapter 1 The Sound a Heart Break Makes
its really not that unrealistic, Its a bit strange but it good your writing style is very cool, I think you really captured the depths of juliet character
Author's Response:
well thanks I appreciate that, and I'm gonna work on making it more to the charecters, I realize it wasnt magnifacent but I'm gonna try and get better. Thanks for your input and time.
Date: April 03, 2008 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 2 Your Stuck With Me
i have no idea what you should write. sorry!!
but i know i'd love to read more. you can't just leave it with shawn carrying out a delirious jules.
how about a hospital scene??
Author's Response: Yes my thoughts were the same, thanx for your input though! I never really realized how much the writers depended on reviews until i wrote my own fic, so thanks for checking in. I think I'll work on the hospital thing or maybe a post episode moment. You've got me all excited now, lol. Thank you so much for your reviews it means a lot to me, that you would take the time to respond.
Date: April 03, 2008 1:38 pm Title: Chapter 2 Your Stuck With Me
what?! no more???
Author's Response: Lol gotta be honest, I've been feverishly checking the review section for a response, because I was rather hoping for some help in that area. I have no idea where to go from here or even wether or not I should. I'm not even very sure if it's good or not, it's my first fic after all.