Date: March 29, 2007 11:20 am Title: Chapter 5
Noooo!!!!! Don't stop there! Please post the next part soon! Really loving the suspense and Henry mad as Hell is fun to read. Please continue soon.
Author's Response: Thanks Katrina! The end will be here soon, I hope.
Date: March 29, 2007 10:09 am Title: Chapter 5
*Fumbles for inhaler* Ok, breath in, breath out, in, out. Ok, I think I'm going to be fine, as long as Shawn stays fine. Good job on this chapter. And yes, take your time on the end. I hope you got back from your break before the time was up though. And you better have brought me something.
I'm glad I make this fun for you. Writing on this site is the most fun for me too!
Thanks again. You're great. Oh by the way I brought you some cake cause tomorrow's my birthday. I'm off work tonight, so there's a good chance this story may get finished. I promise not to hurt Shawn anymore, for now.
Date: March 29, 2007 8:40 am Title: Chapter 5
i LOVE this story!!! great job!!!! i cant wait to find out what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Oh wow. Thanks so much for the review! I'm so glad you like it.
Date: March 28, 2007 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 4
Of course you have still kept the tension. I'll hyperventialate again if you'd like. Ok here goes...must...gasp....have...next update. I love this story. I hope your still working on it, but I am so pleased with your quick updates, I'm allowing you to go take a quick break from writing and get a soda or something (aren't I kind?) Good job, now off with yea! I'm already counting down the seconds of left in your break I gave you. 35,34,33...
Your reviews totally rock! Don't hyperventiate. Deep breaths, in, out, in, out. Thanks for making this fun. I'm still working on this story, but I'm a little confused on how I want to do the next part. I have a few thoughts and can't decide. I hope to figure it out by tomorrow.
Date: March 28, 2007 9:17 pm Title: Chapter 4
EEP! SHAWN! MR. SPENCER, YOU BETTER GET YOUR BUTT OVER THERE BEFORE SHAWN GETS HURT AGAIN! oh, and um, yeah, great chapter, please update soon?
It's so cool you've enjoyed it. I'm working on the next one now. I hope I can keep the tension up. Thanks for the review.
Date: March 28, 2007 9:10 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wow. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch. I was pretty happy with it.
Date: March 28, 2007 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
Nice update. You really capture the characters' emotions well. I can picture this story in my head very easily. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words. I can see this story playing in my head and was hoping it was coming across in my writing.
Date: March 28, 2007 11:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Woo hoo! I was so happy there was another part up! Of course then I was all sad that I read it already and now I have to wait for the next part! Loving the action and Henry with all of his fatherly concern -- don't see that much on the show. Please post another part really, really soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad Henry's concern comes across. That's what I wanted to see. I think you see little hints of it on the show, but I wanted more and it inspired this. I'm working on the next part and hope I don't disappoint.