Date: March 29, 2007 2:43 pm Title: Chapter 5
You really really really really need to update soon!
Author's Response: I promise to try. Thanks.
Date: March 29, 2007 11:20 am Title: Chapter 5
Noooo!!!!! Don't stop there! Please post the next part soon! Really loving the suspense and Henry mad as Hell is fun to read. Please continue soon.
Katrina
Author's Response: Thanks Katrina! The end will be here soon, I hope.
Date: March 29, 2007 10:09 am Title: Chapter 5
*Fumbles for inhaler* Ok, breath in, breath out, in, out. Ok, I think I'm going to be fine, as long as Shawn stays fine. Good job on this chapter. And yes, take your time on the end. I hope you got back from your break before the time was up though. And you better have brought me something.
I'm glad I make this fun for you. Writing on this site is the most fun for me too!
Author's Response:
Thanks again. You're great. Oh by the way I brought you some cake cause tomorrow's my birthday. I'm off work tonight, so there's a good chance this story may get finished. I promise not to hurt Shawn anymore, for now.
Date: March 29, 2007 8:40 am Title: Chapter 5
i LOVE this story!!! great job!!!! i cant wait to find out what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Oh wow. Thanks so much for the review! I'm so glad you like it.
Date: March 28, 2007 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 4
Of course you have still kept the tension. I'll hyperventialate again if you'd like. Ok here goes...must...gasp....have...next update. I love this story. I hope your still working on it, but I am so pleased with your quick updates, I'm allowing you to go take a quick break from writing and get a soda or something (aren't I kind?) Good job, now off with yea! I'm already counting down the seconds of left in your break I gave you. 35,34,33...
Author's Response:
Your reviews totally rock! Don't hyperventiate. Deep breaths, in, out, in, out. Thanks for making this fun. I'm still working on this story, but I'm a little confused on how I want to do the next part. I have a few thoughts and can't decide. I hope to figure it out by tomorrow.
Date: March 28, 2007 9:17 pm Title: Chapter 4
EEP! SHAWN! MR. SPENCER, YOU BETTER GET YOUR BUTT OVER THERE BEFORE SHAWN GETS HURT AGAIN! oh, and um, yeah, great chapter, please update soon?
Author's Response:
It's so cool you've enjoyed it. I'm working on the next one now. I hope I can keep the tension up. Thanks for the review.
Date: March 28, 2007 9:10 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wow. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch. I was pretty happy with it.
Date: March 28, 2007 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
Nice update. You really capture the characters' emotions well. I can picture this story in my head very easily. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words. I can see this story playing in my head and was hoping it was coming across in my writing.
Date: March 28, 2007 11:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Woo hoo! I was so happy there was another part up! Of course then I was all sad that I read it already and now I have to wait for the next part! Loving the action and Henry with all of his fatherly concern -- don't see that much on the show. Please post another part really, really soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad Henry's concern comes across. That's what I wanted to see. I think you see little hints of it on the show, but I wanted more and it inspired this. I'm working on the next part and hope I don't disappoint.
[Report This]Date: March 28, 2007 10:47 am Title: Chapter 4
i like very very much. =p i could use another chapter soon though. =D
Author's Response: Thanks. It has been so much fun to write this and share it with everyone. I'll work hard to get the next chapter up.