Reviewer: Mrs-N-Uzumaki Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2011 7:02 am Title: Chapter 6

I can feel my heart locking in my throat as I read through this...

Reviewer: Mrs-N-Uzumaki Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2011 6:56 am Title: Chapter 3

Argh this is so Goddamn depressing :'(

Reviewer: EriKaBalDeL Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 10, 2010 7:27 pm Title: Chapter 6

loved it!!!

Reviewer: Angel Love Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2008 4:28 pm Title: Chapter 6

Henry.... *sniffles*  So sad. 

I liked this look at Shawn, presumably a couple days later, talking to Gus.  *sighs*  Still very sad, but he's gonna be okay. 

I've actually been waiting for you to answer this challenge for awhile now, wondering how long you'd resist it and I'm so glad you finally did it!  It was perfect! 



Author's Response: lol! A lot of people seem to be waiting for me to answer a lot of challenges! LOL! I'd love to answer them all....most of them seem like they'd be a blast to write! But, having the soft spot for Henry I do, I'm especially intrigued by those involving Henry and Shawn and their twisted, awesome relationship.

Reviewer: Angel Love Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2008 4:21 pm Title: Chapter 5

“Nothing.” Shawn said quickly. “I’m…making toast…and on a completely unrelated topic, do you have a fire extinguisher?”

I love that line!!!  A bit of humor mixed in w/ all the angst and it's so completely and totally Shawn!!!! 

And the ending... *sighs*... well you know what I think about your endings... and it totally gave me warm fuzzies there!  *grins*



Author's Response: I had to have a little humor. Even facing death, there had to be some lightness in there somewhere. I didn't want it to be jsut a tear-jerker. I wanted everyone to be okay in the end. Even Henry is okay.

Reviewer: Angel Love Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2008 4:16 pm Title: Chapter 4

Ahhh.  Perfect.  The chapter and the song.  Just perfect.  And there's really not much else to say... this chapter has left me rather less than coherent.  Perfect will have to do.  Perfect. 

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! :-) Glad you liked it. These chapters were emotionally draining to write, but a whole lot of fun, too! :-)

Reviewer: Angel Love Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2008 4:11 pm Title: Chapter 3

Ahhh, those last two lines are a killer! 

Perfect endings again.  I don't care what you say, my friend, you ARE a genius! 



Author's Response: lol! Actually, ending lines are funny. Sometimes I write an entire chapter based just around the ending line. Sometimes I write a chapter based just around an opening line. As long as I have one or the other, I'm fine. Sometimes I don't know the ending line until I get there.

Reviewer: Angel Love Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2008 4:06 pm Title: Chapter 2

Hehe, I love how Henry was actually getting angry about it at first!  That's so Henry!  And then he got all quiet and touched... and when he said he didn't need it anymore it was kinda sad...

Their silent watching of each other was sad too, but touching, you know?  Very cool.  You rock, my friend. 



Author's Response: Aww, thanks! :-) Glad you liked it. The subtleties of their relationship are sometimes hard to get across non-visually.

Reviewer: Angel Love Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2008 4:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

*sniffs*  So sad.  Poor Henry.  And Shawn.  And Shawn is actually offering to go fishing with him!  *sniffs again* 

It's written so well and so in character!  And the song was perfect for it!  Just perfect!  You're always really good at that... picking the perfect songs for song fics. 

Really good.



Author's Response: Thanks! :-)

Reviewer: Wiccat Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2008 5:43 pm Title: Chapter 6

Normally, I don't like songfics.  I liked this one.  It very nearly made me cry.  Up until the line about the fire extinguisher.  After that, I felt better.  Damn, you're good.

Author's Response: lol! Thanks. I wanted that line to sort of be a turning point. I wanted everyone to come through it okay, even Henry...even though he's dead....



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