Date: October 02, 2008 8:00 pm Title: Round One
i loved it it was so cool
Date: July 17, 2008 1:59 am Title: Round One
I WANT MORE OF THIS! it's so simple yet it tells a lot...this is really good and an interesting spin on things...pleaaaaase can i get more
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really, really glad that you liked these. As far as 'more' goes...sure! But (cause there's always a but!) it can be a while. I thought these little ditties would be really quick...HA. Keep checking back, though. You just never know when the muse may strike!
Date: July 04, 2008 1:23 am Title: Round One
Woot! Go Syd! You finally posted! I'm so glad you entered the frightening world of fanfiction! I can't wait until you get more into this and write something longer. Cause I know you can. ;)
Phew! *wipes off brow* I finally did it! As for something longer....well - we'll see. That's all I'm saying!
Thanks so much for the great review and the words of encouragement!
Date: July 03, 2008 4:04 pm Title: Round One
I liked it, and I am a failure at hiku's, so good work! Seriously!
Author's Response: I am sure you're better than you think! You'll have to practice and join me in haiku insanity - it'll be dope! Thanks for the review:)
Date: June 30, 2008 12:31 pm Title: Round One
What a creative idea! I like these. Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I thought by tackling something short, I could get more done in a shorter amount of time....NOT! So, yeah, I should have more in another 2-3 months. Check back in September:)
Date: June 30, 2008 2:00 am Title: Round One
For your first it's definitely unique and interesting.
I particularly found myself enjoying "Deep in Thought". The simple phrases you gave provided the story and reader with sweet and short imagery. I also felt tension between Shawn and Henry, which I always enjoy.
Triangle was beautiful. Shawn's relationship with his father and friends was at an all time high. He'd repaired damaged relationships and created trusts with others. Now his mom is back and everything is mucked up again.
I am honestly finding myself enjoying this. Vague sections you have to squint to grasp the meaning of appeal to me so by all means keep them coming. :)
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed these! I'm thrilled, actually:) I like short, sweet and vague myself - the older I get, I find that I have the attention span of a goldfish.