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Date: May 28, 2017 1:07 am Title: Happy Birthday Anne Marie

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Date: June 12, 2007 1:44 am Title: Anne and Derek

I don't think Lassiter was out of character considering the circumstance you put him in. Besides, after the passing years, I'm sure he'd be a bit more emotional. I was so disappointed when you cut out the flashback before we could see Shawn's reaction though. I'm really looking forward to that.

Derek seems just like his father, and it's so cute how he interacts with Anne. I'm not sure who has a crush on who or if it's both ways, but you know its there.

BTW: Putting flashbacks into italics or spacing more between scenes might help set off some confusion. I, for one, got a bit lost as to when present day was and when was past.



Author's Response: From Emily: Wow I got 4 1/2 stars plus a review from someone who wrote a story I loved so much. Such a long great review too. Yeah I stopped that flashback at a juicy part, but chapter 3 will probably have Shawn's reaction. I loved writing the interaction between them, they're just so cute together, but I have to give the kudos to Rachael for wanting to make them close like that. Oh I didn't put them in italics but I went back and put spaces like you said I should.

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Date: June 11, 2007 1:43 am Title: Anne and Derek

Lassitor was totally in charater in my opinion, but it did get a little confusing on what was a flashback and what was happening in the present day, overall a good chapter and chant wait for the next one

Author's Response: From Emily: Sorry it got confusing. Thanks for the nice review, chapter 3 might be awhile considering I'm leaving on vacation soon and I have to leave my dear computer behind. But we'll see.

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Date: June 10, 2007 11:26 pm Title: Anne and Derek

i don't think he was out of character..I mean sure you don't usually see that part to Lassiter, but i mean he was there when it happened so ye it's understandable he'd react that way....btw I know what's gonna happen between those two...good chapter..there'd be more flashbacks right?

Author's Response: From Emily: Thanks Sasparilla! Yeah, you normally don't see that side to Lassiter and he's put in a hard place considering he saw it. There will be more flashbacks indeed and then an even thicker plot.



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