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Reviewer: Tine Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2008 1:05 am Title: Chapter 1

OMG GB!! I'm sorry! I must've missed this somehow!! I loooove it!

Gus is TOTALLY Samuel Jackson.

Have you ever seen The Great Train Robbery?

I love Shawn screaming out all that food! Now I want to eat it all!

Reviewer: CK is a Major Dork Who Won't Sign in...And Also a Pimp Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 24, 2008 10:13 am Title: Chapter 1

I love how the firing range scene turned out! Nicely done! :-) You're doing a great job with this, Blue! I like how it's turning out!


Author's Response: Thank you CK!

Reviewer: roguemusician22 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23, 2008 9:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awesome job!  Very funny.  Reminds me of the movie Silverstreak with Gene Wilder.  I loved the line about playing (or not playing) photographic memory I Spy.  Fantabulous.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I have never seen Silver Streak, but I will have to as I am a fan of Gene Wilder.

I am glad you liked the bit with the photographic memory I Spy.

Anyway, I am glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: MorganAdams Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19, 2008 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow - what a lovely, intricate plot!! Great set-up with some fantastic details. And Shawn is wonderfully devious!! Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: I am really glad you like it and I do appreciate the nice things you have said about it. I really wanted the story to have a lot of little details, stories, and characters so that it is really not clear what is going on exactly or who is involved, but that it would be interesting to be introduced to all the little bits.

Reviewer: TheGreatSporkWielder Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2008 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

DUDE! This is going to be a KILLER VS ep! Gus listens to COUNTRY! You mentioned MACGYVER! You=awesome. 

Author's Response: I love MacGyver, in my opinion every story would be better with a bit of MacGyver thrown in. I am glad that you are liking the story as well.

Reviewer: CodeHero77 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2008 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

Haha. Love the Snakes on a Train reference, but Samuel Jackson wasn't in that one was he? I thought that was on a plane... Oh well. Nicely done.


Author's Response: I was actually referencing the Snakes on a Plane movie only...I did not know that there was really a Snakes on a Train movie as well, but I should have guesses, I mean everything has a sequel now. Anyway I am glad that you like it, thank you. 

Reviewer: CK Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2008 7:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice start, Blue! :-) You put a lot of work into this, and it really shows. Nice start to the second ep!


Author's Response: Thanks! I really have appreciated your support.

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