Penname: DinerGuy [Contact] Real name: Jessica Thesealion
Member Since: February 24, 2009
Membership status: Member
Bio:
Hello there! Thanks for venturing into my little corner of PF. About me? Well after a long and crazy journey that I'm still navigating (and of which this site was a huge part!) I have now found a place as a professional editor/office admin monkey by day, fangirl and ficwriter by night. And aspiring novelist in the middle of all of that. Maybe someday you'll find me on your bookshelf!


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Take Two by Ice_Whisper Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf star [Reviews - 24]
Summary: The confrontation at Buzz McNab's apartment really didn't go as Shawn had planned. Oops. Yeah, 911? It's Shawn again.

Notes: Alternate ending to the episode "9 Lives". So obviously, some dialogue is taken straight from the show and-duh-I don't own it. And if you haven't seen the episode...don't read unless you want parts spoiled.

Categories: Season
Characters: Shawn
Genres: Drama
Warnings: Sensitive Material
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1865 Read Count: 2715
[Report This] Published: February 27, 2007 Updated: February 27, 2007
Reviewer: DinerGuy Signed
Date: July 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

Shawn got shot!! I like alternate endings that contain whump. :P
But I really enjoyed reading the story for the writing, as well. You did an awesome job, and your style just eased the whole story through from beginning to end.
The way you started it with the transcript then switched to your own ending (very smoothly, I might add) was well-orchestrated.

Good job!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was supposed to be a simple case. A guy had gone missing and his sister wanted to find him. Shawn would have it solved by the next day and get back to relaxing and goofing off. But an unexpected twist and a web of lies and secrets foil the psychic’s plans. The end of this case will bring a change to this psychic’s life he never expected.


Categories: Season
Characters: Gus, Henry, Shawn
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Mystery
Warnings: Graphic Violence, Tear Jerker
Series: A Universe In The Making
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12772 Read Count: 23417
[Report This] Published: March 02, 2007 Updated: March 08, 2007
Reviewer: DinerGuy Signed
Date: April 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Smoothie Monsters

That was an awesome story! It's kind of creepy that Mychal has my exact personality and looks (well, my eyes are brown, not hazel)! lol But I really liked the story and can't wait to read the rest of your series! :) Great job.

Shafted by MusicalLuna Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf star [Reviews - 110]
Summary:

Only Shawn could injure himself whilst searching a cordoned off office building with a faction of S.B.P.D. officers.

Shameless Shawn whumpage. XDDDDD

Awards:
Categories: Season
Characters: Gus, Juliet, Lassiter, Shawn
Genres: Drama, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8400 Read Count: 24541
[Report This] Published: May 10, 2007 Updated: May 19, 2007
Reviewer: DinerGuy Signed
Date: March 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Getting Perspective

Sweet! I really like this story. :) Shawn whump ... nothin' better. lol

Author's Response: :D :D :D Thanks!! ROFL Speak tha truth bruddah. XD

Summary:

Shawn has a reaction and Lassiter feels guilty.

Awards:
Categories: Season
Characters: Gus, Henry, Juliet, Lassiter, Shawn
Genres: Drama, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2164 Read Count: 5386
[Report This] Published: June 25, 2007 Updated: June 25, 2007
Reviewer: DinerGuy Signed
Date: April 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Don't Eat the Crab

Good job! You kept Lassie just IC enough, but if Shawn got seriously hurt because of him, I could see him feeling guilty. :)

Keeper by windscryer Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 166]
Summary:

Lassiter finally gets the proof he needs to bring Shawn Spencer's psychic charade to a screeching halt.

If only it was that simple . . .

 

Awards:
Categories: Post-season
Characters: Buzz, Gus, Henry, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, Shawn
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery
Warnings: Major Spoilers, Sensitive Material
Challenges: Revealed, Lassie Face!, On Your Marks, Get Set....WHUMP!
Series: Never Say Never
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37481 Read Count: 50661
[Report This] Published: August 21, 2007 Updated: October 19, 2007
Reviewer: DinerGuy Signed
Date: July 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue: Home Again, Home Again

MAJA!!! WHEE!!!!!! I loved it!!

The mystery was great, as was the whump (even though a lot of it was mental :P ). It was well-written and even though the characters were in a bit different situations than we normally see in the show, they still felt very IC.

Great job!! *applauds*

Summary: Past Featured StoryTen years after the Psych agency closed, an old friend returns to Santa Barbara.

 

Awards:
Categories: Post-season
Characters: Juliet, Lassiter, Shawn
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12603 Read Count: 31837
[Report This] Published: September 08, 2007 Updated: September 16, 2007
Reviewer: DinerGuy Signed
Date: April 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Always

That was amazing. It's so sad, but at the same time is perfect. You captured all the characters perfectly. I can see all that happening. *goes off to find Shawn to hug him* Good job.

Out Cold by Xparrot Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 129]
Summary:

Hot on the trail of a criminal gang on a frozen mountainside, Shawn's bike skids out, and as usual it's Gus to the rescue.

Except the Psychmobile's not made for off-roading, the bad guys are armed and on guard, snow's starting to fall, and everything goes downhill from there...

Awards:
Categories: Season
Characters: Gus, Henry, Karen, Shawn
Genres: Action/Adventure, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12226 Read Count: 16076
[Report This] Published: September 30, 2007 Updated: October 22, 2007
Reviewer: DinerGuy Signed
Date: July 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Dashing Through the Snow; Hold the Sleigh

You really should continue this story!! It's amazing. You've written the characters very well, and I would love to find out how they're going to get out of this mess.

Summary:

Eleven years ago, Shawn was a key player in the sting of a serial killer - and nearly became another victim in the process.

No one knew.

Now former acquaintances from a secret life are dropping by, the horrible past that Shawn thought was buried is being dug up, and the murders have resumed - and Shawn is the main target on the hit list.

With the psychic unwilling to give up any more information about his mysterious past than he has to, will his friends and family be able to protect him?

Or will a killer's thirst for revenge be fulfilled?

Rated for possibly gory, violent later chapters and some mild language. Shules

Awards:
Categories: Season, Alternate Universe
Characters: Buzz, Gus, Henry, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, OFC, OMC, Shawn
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Warnings: Graphic Violence, Sensitive Material, Tear Jerker
Challenges: Wanna Be Cop, A Necklace
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23837 Read Count: 62570
[Report This] Published: October 15, 2007 Updated: March 10, 2009
Reviewer: DinerGuy Signed
Date: April 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Connecting Dots without Numbers

Wow oh wow! This story is amazingly awesome! Please update soon!!!

High Tide by LittleFairy Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 148]
Summary:

It had all started out with a fight. Nothing unusual, they fought all the time, like cats and dogs. It wasn't always as serious as it had been this time, but still. They had had worse fights before. But Shawn has enough and decides to take a few days off to get his head clear again. After all, he's in between cases, he can take the time.

What he didn't consider, however, is that when he comes back to Santa Barbara a few days later, his life has changed drastically, and he wasn't even there when it happened.

Shawn flat out refuses to believe the official version of what has transpired, but nobody seems to share his doubts about what supposedly happened. Nevertheless, Shawn won't give up his attempts to get to the bottom of the matter, but could he be wrong this time?

Could it be that he's too involved emotionally to see that sometimes it doesn't take a complicated explanation to shed light on a simple matter?

Sometimes, a cigar is just a cigar.

Sometimes, an accident at sea doesn't leave a body behind.

And sometimes, even Shawn Spencer is wrong.


Categories: Season
Characters: Buzz, Gus, Henry, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, Other, Shawn
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Suspense
Warnings: Tear Jerker
Challenges: 5 Stages
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47806 Read Count: 25627
[Report This] Published: October 21, 2007 Updated: November 06, 2007
Reviewer: DinerGuy Signed
Date: April 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Epilogue - There was no need to tell your mother about this

That was a great story! Well-written and very insightful. It was interesting to see Shawn waiting for Henry in a hospital rather than the vice versa it normally is in most fics on here.
That last scene with Madeline on the phone made me laugh. Long and loud. :D
And not to burst any bubbles, but I feel proud of myself for noticing the date discrepancy and realizing who the bad guy was. :]
But, anyways, I'm so happy I found this story and wanted to let you know how much I liked it. *applauds*

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm a huge sucker for all kinds of Shawn and Henry angst, so it really wasn't surprising that htis came out of it. And yeah, if you pay attention, the date discrepancy was noticeable. Glad you liked hte story, thanks so much for the review.

Summary:

A response to Jenn1984's challenge to creatively whump Shawn.  Let the pain begin . . .

Included in the 'Moments' Series with the permission (and insistence) of MusicalLuna.


Categories: Season
Characters: Gus, Juliet, Lassiter, Shawn
Genres: Humor, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Graphic Violence
Challenges: On Your Marks, Get Set....WHUMP!, Vary the Violence
Series: Moments
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16730 Read Count: 11116
[Report This] Published: November 01, 2007 Updated: June 24, 2008
Reviewer: DinerGuy Signed
Date: April 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Steak Out

Wow. Quite disturbing ... but still totally awesome! Great job using those random kitchen utensils for whump. :D