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Looking forward to a whole lotta pineapple smoothie fiestas here. :D
Psych is the only series I've been so interested in and I think a huge part of that is because of psychfic - thanks guys! As for myself, I think I'll stick to the reading more than writing. More of a person who likes to draw. ;) I even have more retarded drawings (mostly fanart) at deviantart.com, but I really hope I can benefit someone as a beta-reader because it is so important to me to get in the groove of a great story and not have some silly thing like grammar or misspellings ruin it. <3
(Shules FTW!)
Ciao for now~
When the Psych cast goes on a yacht for the wedding of a colleague, murder follows. Trapped on a yacht with a killer, Shawn, Juliet, Gus, Lassiter and Karen are faced with the difficult task of catching the murderer. There is nowhere for the killer to hide from the police, but there is also nowhere for the yacht’s occupants to hide from the killer.
Pairings: Shawn/Juliet, Gus/OC
Awards:
Categories: Season
Characters: Gus, Henry, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, OFC, OMC, Other, Shawn
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84108 Read Count: 144977
Date: March 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
Wow... I mean...WOW! I really love how in depth you get with the story. It's just how the shows are - they add lil tidbits of humor on the side.. like that whole Lassie thing!! haha That was just super. :D
Can I also say that I am a huge fan of that lil' shoe game with Shawn and Jules? Great touch and very smooth. ;)
Your story is great in every way.. very unique plot!
Date: March 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
Oodles of fun reading this story! I love how each piece of the puzzle is slowly put down. You give us enough information to let us act like detectives too. :D Fun!
I've also got to say that you put a lot of great work into your original characters.
There was something else I had wanted to say... ah it slips my mind. Maybe it was the humor? Hm, can't remember - but on with the show!
Date: March 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
I want to say ... I LOVE you! haha This is really great, and wow what a surprise... Yep, I definitely didn't see Gus being the second hostage. You really made this story suspenseful and every bit of exciting from beginning to end.
Poor Shawn. I don't feel sorry for Christina either. Hehe, normally when I read stories with Shules in it, Shawn is usually the one getting beaten up. Interesting and good to read something unique for once. Puts Shawn as the main center of attention, but doesn't make it seem to OOC.
Past Mistakes always come back to haunt you. No matter how deep you thought you buried them, it's never deep enough. Unearthed past mistakes have the power to hurt and destroy you - and the people around you. The one thing you have to rely on then is that the base of trust you have with the people close to you is strong enough to survive the consequences. Because there is nothing harder to fix than broken trust.
It was an interesting enough case, who would blame Shawn for wanting to get involved? The SBPD is stuck in the most recent murder case, and Shawn can unearth just enough facts to get them going again.
But the case progresses into a direction nobody could have predicted, and soon Shawn wishes that for once he had kept his nose out of a case. When the case gets personal, he just might find out things he doesn't want to know. Things that might shake a foundation of trust he never imagined being shakeable. The question is whether broken trust can be rebuilt. Or whether it can't be...ever.
Answer to Twyla's "Seed of Doubt" challenge.
Categories: Season
Characters: Gus, Henry, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, Other, Shawn
Genres: Angst, Casefile, Hurt/Comfort, Suspense
Warnings: None
Challenges: A seed of doubt
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65213 Read Count: 87715
Date: April 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue - Unfinished Business
Oh my gosh - that was a WONDERFUL story! I loved every word, every emotion, every bit of it!
Your writing style is very nice and the flow of the words was so easy to read. It was pretty hard to hold myself back from reading the next chapter. I just wanted to savor it for as long as possible.
The epilogue was too funny! Haha, you've really wrapped your head around the personality of each character very well. Shawn's mischievous way and Gus' poor attempt to pacify it in any way possible. :D
Also have to say that I loved how well you wrote each chapter and wrote enough details to see the picture clearly without overflowing my head with too many words. haha I must be partially ADD, but that's irrelevant.
Also liked your original characters and how you tied their relationship to Shawn and Henry. It was very touching to hear Henry say all those nice things to his son.
Anyway, one of my favorite stories - thanks so much for writing it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the awesome review. This was my first Psych multichapter story, and for many reasons it's still very dear to me. So I'm really thrilled that you liked the story so much. Thanks a lot.
This WaterWorld is like the movie Waterworld. Low-budget.
When Shawn gets roped into a job at a waterpark, it's murder, meyhem, and madness galore.
Categories: Virtual Season
Characters: Gus, Juliet, Lassiter, Shawn
Genres: General, Humor, Mystery
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16372 Read Count: 55749
Date: April 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Surface Tension
Dang it... you know how to makes the fans drool huh?
Author's Response: XDDDDDDDDDDD It's not too difficult, odds are, if it makes me swoon, it's gonna work on someone else. xDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Date: April 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Epilogue - Water Under the Bridge
Wow I LOVED this story! Haha, you whumped poor Shawn good. XD I love how the wrap up went at the end too.
The interaction between Shawn and Jules was cute too. haha Such adorableness because Shawn is not shy and just lays everything out on the table where Jules tries her best to be discreet. It's too cute!! :3 <3
Author's Response: XDDDDDDD I do my best. Heee, thank you SO much. I really appreciate such an awesome review!
The emotional break down of a car crash.
Awards:Categories: Short
Characters: Juliet, Shawn
Genres: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3215 Read Count: 10025
Date: April 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: It's all chemistry of a car crash
*sing-song voice* That was amaaazing!
The different sensations I felt. I think it started out with hearing the surroundings. The thunder, raindrops, and person approaching.
Feeling was the next biggest sense I could imagine. His warm hands on her cheek. I think we all know just how good it feels to have someone's warm hand warm you up on a very cold day.
Wonderful story - I really like how you made out the whole "I feel so" sequence.
Author's Response: I'm really happy you liked this story, icekold! Thank you for sending a review! <3
A young woman is brutally murdererd. The police don't think they need Shawn's help on this case. But then somebody else asks Shawn to get involved - his own father.
As Shawn investigates, he gets entangled in a web of wrong suspicions and misplaced trust, until he himself no longer knows what to believe. Because if there's one thing Shawn has learned over the years as a police consultant, it's that you don't always find the evidence you'd like to find.
Categories: Season
Characters: Gus, Henry, Juliet, Lassiter, Shawn
Genres: Casefile, Mystery, Suspense
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95628 Read Count: 117119
Date: March 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Now that was uncalled for
Phew, I've got to say that this has been a very non-stop reading story! Amazing how well you place yourself in Shawn's shoes. All from that sarcastic, stubborn, to funny.
I've also got to say that it was an interesting twist. I thought that Jason would've intentionally shot Shawn, but to see that it was an accident totally knocked me off my thinking post. Great work with that. :D Oh and your description of everything that goes on after the gun is fired is just... descriptive as can be. I really felt like I was the one shot. You don't know these things from experience do you? hehe Well, you do well in that department with every chapter, not just that one bit.
Great work LittleFairy!!
Author's Response:
Lol, no I've never been shot ;-) Neither have I ever shot anybody. But as far as medical things go, I always try to put in as much research as I can to keep things realistic.
And I'm really thrilled you liked the story so much. Plot-wise, I think it was my story so far that had the most planning gone into it - hey, it even had a sub-plot. And that you said it was fun and something you wanted to read non-stop is really the best compliment I can get. Thanks so much for the great review.
Right before Shawn and Gus go on a road trip they are kidnapped. No one is looking for them and now Shawn is being forced to be the perfect criminal with Gus's life on the line if he slips up.
Made for Skysalla's challenge Perfect Crminal
Categories: Season
Characters: Buzz, Gus, Henry, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, OMC, Shawn
Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Suspense
Warnings: Graphic Violence
Challenges: Perfect Criminal
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17063 Read Count: 41250
Date: March 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Reservoir Psychics
Really enjoyed reading this story! I had read the summary of it over a month and a half ago and thought "That's something to read!" but never had the time. You can only imagine how excited I was to find it again and even more excited to find out how good it really was!
Author's Response:
I'm thrilled that you thought it was a story worth reading just from the summary! And I'm really glad that you thought it was good! Thank you so much IcEKoLd! =)
Most hostages don't have to worry about being sat upon. But then, Shawn Spencer isn't most hostages.
Categories: Short
Characters: OFC, Shawn
Genres: Suspense
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2491 Read Count: 4635
Date: March 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Down Under
Great one-shot! Haha, I love how well you placed Shawn's character in the midst of danger.