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I'm in my thirties, female, and have earned an M.F.A. in English/Creative Writing. I've been interested in writing most of my life, and started writing poetry (which is the genre I mostly studied in school) when I was 12 or 13. My dream is to become a published and successful author/poet/novelist/writer of books. 

I started writing fanfiction back in college, around 2000. I'm much more confident now about my ability to transition from poetry to fanfiction short stories and full-length chapters. Mostly everything I write has some kind of darkness to it, but I feel that my style and skill is in constant evolution. I find myself surprised and delighted (and sometimes shocked) over and over again with what happens when I "follow the characters".

I enjoy writing/reading in the genres of Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Suspense, Action/Adventure, Drama, and Angst mostly, though I'm starting to learn Humor—in its dark form anyway. I love Psych; everything about the show and the writing and reading of fics has become an all consuming fire in my life—pushing me to be creative during my waking hours and in my nightly dreams. Lassiter is my favorite character, but all of the characters have really grown on me and made an impact; they each want their own voices to be "heard". 

I'm happy to say that my first completed Psych fic, "Ask For Another Day",   came out so well and that it's a story that people, and not just myself, want to read. Wow. I'm very proud of this first one, my "baby", which brought such hope and happiness that I can accomplish my goals. It feels like I just wrote my first "book", and it's a wonderful, touch-the-stars-up-above feeling. I hope that, by writing fanfiction, and feeling like I'm "doing a good job with it", that I can get my confidence up enough to actually write and publish a book.

Currently, I have five WIPs and one WIP episode tag "series".

I always appreciate reviews and feedback as well as your time to share your opinions of my work with me. So thank you in advance to any readers/reviewers! :) Really, I love my reviewers—you are awesome!

NOTE: I know I am currently extremely behind on updating, as well as author responses, but I want to let my readers/reviewers know that I am not giving up on anything, in spite of whatever stress RL throws (and throws and throws and throws) at me. I feel very blessed to be a part of this wonderful site and to have met so many awesome writers and lovers of Psych, and I appreciate all of you so much. <3 

Thank you thank you thank you to whomever nice, sweet people nominated my work for the 2010 and 2011 PFAs, and who voted for me. *melts into goo* :)

My username is the same on fanfiction.net. I just signed up with the usanetwork message boards, and my username on that forum is LunaGreen_Eye_Glass. And one more, fictionpress.com: GothOnTheInside (where I will be posting my original (non-fanfiction) poems). And, because I'm apparently insane, lol, Twitter: LunaOnTheInside.

 

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Summary: Past Featured StoryShawn messes up. And worse, he's not the one paying the consequences for it. Nor is Lassiter, but he wouldn't keep his fat head out of this story either. Apparently they both suffer from COAS (Center of Attention Syndrome).

 

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Categories: Season
Characters: Lassiter, Shawn
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3529 Read Count: 8052
[Report This] Published: February 21, 2007 Updated: February 21, 2007
Reviewer: silverluna Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved this! It was a very sweet, poignant friendship story, and had a real feel to it. I loved how IC both were, Gus too. In fact, everyone was. Your story had a very natural flow... poor Shawn literally beating himself up over something that he couldn't stop (very dark!). Then Lassiter talking him back from the edge without it being sappy. Wonderful! Loved the near fainting too. And the ending had nice touches too. I was getting all weepy in places. Enjoyable, thanks for writing it!

Two's Company by centipede Rated: eT starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 60]
Summary: Past Featured Story

It seemed, as it so often does, a good idea at the time. But there's company for dinner, and Shawn's not exactly sure how he got from point A to point B.

But then eating at Dad's has always been like that.

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Categories: Season, Short
Characters: Henry, Lassiter, Shawn
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11364 Read Count: 9662
[Report This] Published: July 09, 2007 Updated: August 17, 2007
Reviewer: silverluna Signed starstarstarstarhalf star
Date: September 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Look Who's Coming For Dinner

I know what you're trying to do with your intro... guilt me in finally picking up Frankenstein and reading it.... well, now, it's kind of working... :p 

Shawn’s life was a sequence of well-timed moments, and he’d learned to take advantage.  No sh*t, lol! That is ridiculously perfect and completely sums up Shawn as a whole. (oh, and not swearing at you, just agreeing wholeheartedly). I can visualize all this, Shawn sweeping in, completely absorbed in himself and thing he wants, which is so ironic for such a highly observant person as Shawn Spencer not be more aware of his surroundings, even a familar setting like his childhood home... ah, but it's perfect. He's not *expecting* anything to be off. 

He tried not to sound angry, failed, tried to look amused, failed again, and finally thrust his free hand into his pocket. He’d been taken aback. He didn’t do "taken aback."  Ha ha ha! Priceless! I love the tension between the 3 them, with Henry really digging the knife in with only a few sentences, Lassie not yet saying a word and Shawn just digging his own grave with his mouth and his defensive stance.

Lol, I love this file "disappearing in the fried rice section" of Henry's Thai cookbook. That rocks. :) 

Aww, I love Lassie's explain of why he had a change of heart when it came to fishing with Henry. :) 

It's absolutely perfect, this "banter" btwn Henry and Lassiter about Shawn's needing to always be the center of attention. And Henry is just "mean" but so in character, because that's the way he usually talks to Shawn and about Shawn in front of others. Gaahh! That is just awesome. 

Henry had riled Shawn, of all people, and Lassiter was nearly grinning because he’d gotten front row seats. Also awesome. Cut the tension with a knife! Love it!

And you've painted this picture of "Shawn the sulking teenager" so well; Henry's house & Henry's rules! ;) "Shawn knew he had lost." lol, that rocks. Well, not for Shawn, but for me because it's really funny to see Shawn squirm in this situation. He clearly doesn't want to be there with both his father and Lassiter, but he so needs Henry to help him with his lead and is torn between these two things he wants and can't make up his mind... though he'll probably lost both things either way (the game's not really being played in his favor.) Love your Lassiter by the way! :) 

Lol, this "three's a crowd" stuff has some mojo! Lassie's upset because he doesn't want Shawn there, Shawn's upset because he doesn't want Lassie there, doesn't want to be there and because he wants to be the center of attention, and Henry's just trying to make the best of it all while trying to teach Shawn a lesson. :D It's hilarious and intense at the same time! :)  Love that Lassie jumps at Henry's tone, barely suppressing the urge to smack Shawn, even after he sees that  Henry is angry with Shawn and not him.

Heeheehee, I love that Henry reveals Shawn's crush for Juliet in front of Lassie, only to have Lassie seriously freak about it because he seems to feel like Shawn isn't good enough for his partner. :) I love that! Protective! Lassie for Juliet. Adorable.  And that he's also teasing Shawn that he's going to let it slip to juliet how Shawn feels... heehee, that is so evil! Go Lassie! 

"World-class BS-er"! Yes! He so is! I love how Shawn ensnares himself in his own trap with the "let's the three of us go out fishing together" thing, since Shawn can "naturally do better than two 'old' guys." LOL. Priceless!!! love it! And that Shawn almost gets out of it until that magic word "O'Hara" leaves him high & dry... holy crap. Loved this first chapter. And I'm sorry, but I'm going to say it, you're a damn good writer. :p :)  (but I do get what you said in your note up above. But still, you're good.) 

Reviewer: silverluna Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Saturday Night Out

Ha ha, I love how you set up this even more uncomfortable situation by sticking these three in a boat together and remind the characters that "this is all Shawn's fault" (since he's the one complaining). lol. I love the awkwardness too as Shawn tries to renounce his impulses while Henry finally gets the engine going. LOL, I was giggling over Shawn's  Did no one understand the kind of time that went into creating a hairstyle that looked like no time had gone into creating it?

That is soooo Shawn. In fact, all of your characters remain true to each of their characters. I love that Shawn continues to try to be the center of attention, even among his least desirable audience, and is hurt when his they ignore him. 

OMG, I LOOVVVED Shawn using his sticky fingers in poor Lassiter's tackle box. I can so easily visualize what is going on throughout the whole story. :D I like that Henry refuses to indulge Shawn's behavior, though I can't picture Henry really ever seeing Shawn's behavior as "cutesy", but it must be especially annoying for his adult child to be acting the way that he always does in front of Lassiter, while they're all trapped in a boat, trying to fish. 

Lol, you know, I wouldn't put it past Henry to eat a dolphin, or even chop one up to feed to mini-Shawn. ;)  I love the detail you put into making their fishing accurate. This story reminds me a lot of fishing off the dock at a lake when I was a kid, or sitting in a boat in the middle of the lake, catching those tiny sunfish, which sometimes we didn't get back in the water fast enough.... Lol, Shawn getting criticized like Lassiter did about his pole holding technique by Henry! Nice touch! :) Hee hee, I love how Shawn tries to get Lassie in trouble with Henry, forcing Lassiter to say to get them to move on. LOL. ;D  Ha ha, loved this:

"That would be me," Henry said, his smile failing to come across as pleasant. "And you aren't going to feel a fish catch on--"

"You know," said Lassiter, sitting down suddenly. "I think it's really time we move on, I'm getting almost no action out here. We've pretty well cleared this spot."

"Agreed," Shawn said immediately, sitting abruptly on his rear. He finished his beer with a hard swig when Henry shot him an unimpressed look.

Henry didn't look pleased, but he knew Lassiter, even if Shawn had no idea what he was talking about, had a point. He sat as well, reaching back for the engine, and didn't miss the glance the other two shot at each other, camraderie, for one miniscule second, written on their faces.

Awwww.... poor whumped Shawn! Hooked like a fishy through the lip! I loved Lassiter's and Henry's concern for Shawn afterwards. 

LOL, poor Shawnie! "I ne'fer," he wheezed over the sound of Henry and Lassiter tinkering with the engine, "w'anted to em'p'athize w'ith a fish. Thank you," his lip throbbed and he winced, "so m'uch."

 Omg, I love that Vick happens to be at the ER waiting for her husband to get stitches, and she recognizes the three of them by the back of their heads. lol

She considered walking away, because whatever had brought this particular combination of characters here couldn't be good. Not these three.

 How cute is Shawn complimenting Vick who's holding her daughter? Aww. Except there's that pesky fish hook through the lip bloody mess to consider.... still cute though, the "softer" compliment. And her incredulousness is priceless: "All you did was taking him fishing?"! Lol, right? OMG, can I tell you how hilarious it is that they're all trying so very hard not to laugh?! :D She tried not to look amused. From what she could gather her old friend had taken his son--as well as her head detective--fishing, accidentally (she was assuming, but you could never be sure with this family) hooked him in the face (probably casting a line), and then gotten him well and soundly drunk. Before taking him to the emergency room.

OMG, LOL, I loved this:

"I'm saving him the aggravation. Later, when you're less..." she searched for a word.

"You," Lassiter filled in for her.

 

Shawn's list of "looking on the bright side" was just freaking hysterical, as well as the incredulous responses from Henry and Lassiter.

Aww, what a sweet bittersweet & poignant parting shot: "Lassiter watched them, Shawn whining and bemoaning his fate while Henry pushed and prodded him into a more comfortable position. Henry didn't speak and Shawn didn't open his eyes, but for a second, Lassiter was struck by the loss of the children his wife had thought he didn't want." 

Poor Lassie! *hugs him* 

Hee hee, I laughed and giggled all the way through this; the whump was a big yet funny surprise. Great job with this two parter! :D 

Summary:

While searching for stolen bonds in the woods, Buzz McNabb wins babysitting duty for a certain psychic consultant for the SBPD. And Lassiter proves something he never meant to. As non-angsty as it gets because, seriously, this is Buzz we're talking about.

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Categories: Season, Short
Characters: Buzz, Lassiter, Shawn
Genres: General, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5506 Read Count: 8435
[Report This] Published: August 28, 2007 Updated: August 28, 2007
Reviewer: silverluna Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very enjoyable story, with some whump for Shawn, Buzz's goofy but semi-heroic acts, Juliet and Lassiter's anger and even Lassiter sort of admitting that Shawn was part of the team, Team Psych! lol. Poor Buzz having to "babysit" and then try to prop the tranqued Shawn up like a "Ken doll" (great line!) as Shawn slurred his words and tried to insist he was just about nearly fine. It was so funny when tranqued Shawn was trying to get Gus off the phone by trying to make Gus believe the line was crackling but it wasn't sounding convincing and Shawn was just spitting on the phone, lol. I also enjoyed Buzz telling Gus that he was right and Shawn was wrong. :p

I just loved these paragraphs:

Shawn could see Lassiter and Juliet peering at him, worried expressions on both their faces, but they were distorted and odd looking. Lassiter was talking, his mouth moving, but no sound seemed to be coming out of it. A second later a slow, deep voice broke through, but it was too hard to understand, and even harder to care. He saw Lassiter look up at someone behind him and say something, but he didn’t catch any of it.

A second later the world was pitching past his slowly tracking eyes, trees blurring into the sky. An arm was sliding around his back, and suddenly his legs were swinging up and into someone’s strong grip. It was dizzying, but hardly worth the protest. He realized he was staring up at Buzz’s curious face and towards the blue of the sky. He gazed, eyes glassy, past both.

after Shawn ends up punctured with the third one and Buzz sweeps him up into his arms, "bridal style" as Shawn's vision and perception fades. Lots of great imagery! OMG, and the dispatcher: "That sounds like something Shawn Spencer would do!" LOL. :D It so does!  Just awesome. :) Shawn's nickname for Buzz was so cute. :) That's a nifty idea too, having poor Shawn open the door all rigged up with darts. :) Loved Juliet & Lassiter's reactions to the criminals setting it up to kill Shawn, they were mad! It was great. :) Awesome story, it was a fun read! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  You leave such great reviews - I can't tell you what it means to have you quote back lines to me.  It's extremely gratifying and stokes my somewhat unhealthily large ego.

Imagery is so important to a story - I like to be able to see everything that's going on in my head, and the great thing about writing is that you can make people feel and/or see what the character is feeling and/or seeing.  Augh, I'm starting to repeat myself - I blame the lack of sleep.

 Thank you again!  Can't say it enough :).

White by dragonnan Rated: E starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary: How to die when you're living. 
Categories: Short
Characters: Gus, Henry, Juliet, Shawn
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: Tear Jerker
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 472 Read Count: 1798
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2007 Updated: November 13, 2007
Reviewer: silverluna Signed
Date: June 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: I Thought I Could Hear

Review response poem:

I ache

words split in halves, split in half (how they fray)

my feeble fingertips reach to snatch the light in the dark and the dark side of light (losing both halves)

I ache, in the disconnect between body and mind, you press your hands hard against my chest; my head dips (and I know I'm losing these halves of halves) 

Etch the sound of human soul against my ear, what I long to hear— your voices, the familiar manner in which you lilt your L's, dot your I's, the scowl of S or cross of T

I ache (I have drown in this life, no more, no more)

Inside my insides just this: breath of fish, no more breathing anymore (your kiss of arms, clumsy hugs, your fumbling stares) 

Crush, hiss, hush— these noises the loudest, (rush, press, I can almost hear a sky split its halves into half) 

Time: what is this gift? In this I only ache, though no sensation here of flesh or bone— if I can't wake, only in this place— without touch; no sun, or wind, whisper or feather, blanket, craddle, pillow, you

I cry— I can see you through my own eyes

Up there patchwork nighttime

 



Author's Response: Oh man wow!!  Coolest response in ever!!  I don't even know where this story came from, but it was so worth it to write to see this beautiful reply!!  Thank you so much, I'm deeply touched!!

Summary:

I've found that my previous summary was no longer accurate.  In large part due to the quantity of pure crack that has begun to invade this series.  Whump stories are still the primary theme, but you will also now find the bizarre, the impossible, and the compellingly weird.  

I make no apologies. 

That's it.  The summary is over.

 


Categories: Pre-season, Season
Characters: Gus, Henry, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, Shawn
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Crack!, Drama, Fluff, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: 100 Themes
Series: Warehouse of Rabid Plot Bunnies
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 53858 Read Count: 134732
[Report This] Published: December 25, 2007 Updated: April 11, 2015
Reviewer: silverluna Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 52: 12. Insanity

OMG! O.O This is just so perfectly WRONG but so hilarious that I can't help but like it and find it interesting in its total messed up scenario. xD Great ending! It almost seems like it was a laugh or cry moment following their hasty departure, and Vick chooses insanity because, hey, it's Shawn and Gus, randomly in her exam room, making the cervix opening tool "quack". xD This has got to be the most discomfiting mundane situation I have ever read in a fic. xD 

I would love to see a follow up to this—as to why Shawn and Gus were mysteriously in Vick's exam room in the first place—that, to me, is almost worse than the "quacking" thing.  LOLOLOLOL ROFL This was so pricelessly messed up and hilarious! XD XD XD XD XD 

P.S. Thanks for making me smile and laugh with this. :)

Hangman by MusicalLuna Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Not all games are innocent.


Categories: Short
Characters: Juliet, Lassiter, Shawn
Genres: Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Suspense
Warnings: None
Challenges: Vary the Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 871 Read Count: 3323
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2007 Updated: December 30, 2007
Reviewer: silverluna Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Dark and Stormy Night...

This was awesome, I loved it! I don't think it was "too mean" at all. (It might have been "mean" if the ending wasn't a happy one.) Great whump! I loved the thunder/lightning/dark night as the setting, with Lassiter and Juliet plodding through dark and silent rooms looking for Shawn who hasn't been seen or heard from in quite some time.

I must say too, I love how chock-full of Lassiter this short was, and that we got to see worry and concern for Shawn's whereabouts—as well as some horror from both Lassiter and Juliet upon finding Shawn all strung up. 

So chilling to think of Shawn hanging by the neck from a ceiling fan as it continues to make drowsy circles like nothing is wrong. Loved the CPR scene, and then Shawn's usual smart-alecky humorous reactions immediately upon waking. Great! The last two lines were my favorite of the piece:

"Jeez, Shawn, you really know how to maximize the drama, even when you’re unconscious."

He grinned. "It’s the only way to go."

They are so true! This is what it's like to live in Shawn-land. LOL.  

Loved this one! Thanks! :)

Summary: When Shawn, Juliet, and Lassiter are in a standoff situation, it is up to Shawn to make the shot to save them all.
Categories: Season
Characters: Henry, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, OMC, Shawn
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Suspense
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2015 Read Count: 3028
[Report This] Published: June 22, 2008 Updated: June 22, 2008
Reviewer: silverluna Signed
Date: July 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great, very suspenseful! I was holding my breath throughout the whole first section. What a terrible whump mess, huh? Juliet shot! Lassiter at knife point! Shawn with a gun in his hand and one pointed at him too! What a scary bad guy who can hold a gun and a knife steady at the same time! Loved the flashback with 14 year old Shawn learning to shoot. 

Lol, the ending was cute. "Nobody can shoot like that and call it a gift! . . . Seriously, tell me!" LOL

Summary: Sometimes it has to come from the outside. Lassiter/Juliet.
Categories: Short
Characters: Juliet, Lassiter, Shawn
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 677 Read Count: 1432
[Report This] Published: July 30, 2008 Updated: July 30, 2008
Reviewer: silverluna Signed starstarstarstarhalf star
Date: September 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Playing Interference

Awwwww, wasn't this story just the sweetest ever?! Every now and then I don't mind indulging in some nice Lassiet, and this was some very sweet and nice Lassiet! Way to go, MusicalLuna! :D And how adorable was it to have Shawn playing cupid? Awww! "May I?" Awwww!! And the kiss, so light and perfect. :D As I mentioned, I loved your writing style and descriptions. Again, soooo sweet! Thanks for sharing this little bit of Lassiet with us. :D 

Author's Response: XDDDDDDDD I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Hehehe, thanks for letting me know what you liked, I really appreciate you taking the time to do that. :D :D :D And believe me, my pleasure. ^_^

Summary:

There were so many reasons why they shouldn't.

Which pretty much made it inevitable they would.

Jassie.


Categories: Short
Characters: Juliet, Lassiter
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7359 Read Count: 4753
[Report This] Published: August 26, 2008 Updated: November 07, 2010
Reviewer: silverluna Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Piecrust Promises

Lol, side bit of information: I'm reading my very first romance novel so this comes at a great time. Every now and then I do enjoy a little bit of Lassiet. ;) Because they are really cute together; sometimes, you could almost picture... lol, though I have to admit I'm completely happy with those two hugging too. Lol, now onto the review!

I love that we see this from Juliet's POV, that she's telling her story as kind of a confessional "diary-like" entry, as if us as readers have stumbled across her personal thoughts but are too intrigued to turn away. This section rocked:

"Distraction on a stakeout—either because you're fighting or because you're definitely not fighting—is one of the most unprofessional—and dangerous—things you can do wrong in this job.

And hesitation?

It can be a killer. Literally.

Like right now.

I should be focused on the bad guy and how I'm going to stop him.

But I'm just a little distracted.

Okay, I've been distracted for a long time."

 

This is hilarious and subtle ("fighting or definitely *not* fighting), how she is trying to talk both herself and the reader out of believing how potentially bad and dangerous an idea such as interoffice romance could be— yet she continues to confess she's been thinking this over ("distracted") for a long time.

Ha! :D And then you go and up the ante by putting Lassiter in danger as poor Juliet muses over her romantic emotions and her duty as a copy. Loved this line with its "modern fairy-tale-esque" quality:

"There's something particularly paralytic about seeing the man you only recently admitted to yourself that you love in mortal danger."

Sort of a role reversal, with the "prince" in danger, the "passive maiden" with the magic/ strength to change the course of the situation— if only, if only she could get her feelings & fears in check. Plus, I love that the layers that image gives us— she's frozen, both in fear of Carlton's death and of the killer's control, yet she's also 'frozen' by her inability (so far) to either admit her feelings to him or to come to grips with the simple fact that she has these feelings for Lassiter and that "it's okay". And to add another 'plus', ;) it's nice to see the concept of being frozen as she is, kind of waiting to be unfrozen/ set "afire" by whatever ... um, passion or potential passion may await as whatever this is that she/ they have progresses. (Haha, some of that may be the romance novel talking!)

;) Ha! I love how you don't give it to us just yet— instead you give us a "distinctly uncomfortable" Lassiter who seems just the same as his old self, and completely unaware of his partner's feelings. And Juliet's tackle? Priceless! ;) 

Thank you so much for writing this! Can't wait to read more— though I don't mind waiting for long update times. ;)