Penname: Insertwittynamehere [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: May 23, 2009
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*Stolen from the USA Network website ;D*


Nicknames:
Lozzaa, LozzaaCakes, LC, Holmes, Jim, Leonard :)


What's on your playlist? (My wut? *puts iPod on shuffle*)

  1. Fall Out Boy: Golden [Live]
  2. Paramore: Whoa
  3. Les Misérables Soundtrack: Valijean's Soliloquy
  4. Kerry Ellis & Brian May: Defying Gravity
  5. Cobra Starship: It's Warmer in the Basement

Favorite Album at Age 15:
Hot Mess - Cobra Starship

Three things I couldn't live without:

  1. Oxygen
  2. Coffee
  3. Fic :D

Three Books:

  1. I Am The Messenger by Markus Zuzak
  2. The Perks of Being a Wallflower by Stephen Chbosky
  3. Of Mice and Men by John Steinbeck

Three Websites:

  1. www.wikipedia.org
  2. www.facebook.com
  3. www.google.com

What's the craziest thing I've ever done?
Where do I start?

Best American City:
Never been to the States, but I guess New York City would be pretty awesome :D

Favorite Ice Cream Topping:
Chocolate, chocolate and more chocolate

Describe Yourself in One Word
Discombobulated

Now in Spanish
¿En serio? Incluso el Internet no sabe...

 Crime of Fashion:
Any of those awful flowery/frilly dresses I was forced to endure as a child of the 90s...

Worst Hairstyle:
Prolly when it was like, shoulder length with a mid-parting when I was like, 10. Even my dad compared me to Olive from "On the Buses"...

Favorite Old Movie:
Singing In The Rain :D

Name of Your Imaginary Band? What Instrument Do You Play?:
Obsession - Lead Vocals :D

Dirty Little Secret:
I have never seen "Dirty Dancing"
... And I don't really plan to.

If You Had to Have a Girl's Name, What Would You Choose?
I do have a girl's name

Here's $10 ... What Do You Buy?
First convert it to £6.51 and weep because that doesn't really get you much. Maybe wander into Primark and buy three £2 vest tops :D

Your environmentally conscious invention:
Human relocation to Mars :)

Your Superhero Name ("The," your favorite color, the automobile your dad drives):
The Orange Mazda

What Celebrity do People Say You Look Like?
Kermit :D

The last thing that made me laugh out loud:
Going onto Bebo. LOLZ I STILL HAZ ONE. I haven't been active on it for over a year :D

Quote:
"Writing is a socially accepted form of schizophrenia"

 


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Hopeless by Nyxelestia Rated: eT starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

A response to Jessie's challenge: What would Shawn do if Gus got hurt?

Well, here's my take on it, but from Henry's POV, on how Shawn deals with depression and guilt and how he copes with the loss of one of the most important people in his life. This is a major H/C genre, but it's important.


Categories: Season, Alternate Universe, Short
Characters: Gus, Henry, Shawn
Genres: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Character Death, Tear Jerker
Challenges: What would Shawn do?, Changes, My best friend
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2951 Read Count: 3195
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2007 Updated: July 29, 2007
Reviewer: Insertwittynamehere Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Hopeless

I noticed you never mentioned Gus' name here and i was impressed.. in  between the hysterical sobbing.
I'd say I loved it because I did but I also didn't 'cause... Well you know what I'm getting at.
Either way, of all the death fics I've read on this site, this is the best one I've read. It was the most accurate portrayal of how Shawn and indeed Henry would cope (or not so much) if it ever happened.
Well done (:

LC x

Summary: Something happens (not a head thump) and Shawn becomes what he professed to be. However, can he handle it, or will it make him literally (proper use of the word) insane first? And is anyone going to believe him before the Santa Barbara Cereal Killer (Yes, you read that right) strikes again?
Categories: Post-season
Characters: Gus, Henry, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, OFC, OMC, Shawn
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Supernatural, Suspense
Warnings: Graphic Violence, Sensitive Material
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 19472 Read Count: 17085
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2008 Updated: March 13, 2009
Reviewer: Insertwittynamehere Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh. My. Gawd. It's been so long since the last update but PLZ tell me there's more. There is more jes? I love how shawn's visions are portrayed in contest to his usual dramatics - very effective and awesome

Author's Response: I'm sorry it's been so long, but time, life, and circumstances are really bizarre . . . anyway, I do have another part written, I'm just trying to find time to post it.

Summary:

It's that time of year again. The time when Christmas approaches, and everyone is busy falling prey to the stress of the season. Presents need to be bought and wrapped, cards need to be sent, family visits prepared.

With everything that's going on at this time of year, it's easy to forget the things that really count.

For the Psychfic-Advent Calendar


Categories: Season
Characters: Gus, Henry, Juliet, Lassiter, Shawn
Genres: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11580 Read Count: 35650
[Report This] Published: December 18, 2008 Updated: December 21, 2008
Reviewer: Insertwittynamehere Signed
Date: August 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: The Totally Awesome Christmas Party

aww I've read this so many times now... Why haven't I reviewed??? *slaps self*

 I just have to quote this one bit...

"Just for the record, I cancelled right after I received the invitation. I don't even know what I'm doing here."

 OMG LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL

I love it xD

and the whole "Eat the cookie, Carlton"

Omg I like Lassie in this fic, this is my favourite version of written!Lassie...

*falls over*

LC x



Author's Response: Lol, thanks so much. I'm glad it entertained you, and that you liked Lassie since I'm not that used to writing him as others are. Thanks a lot for the review.

Summary:

Having Shawn back was great, even if it was just for the week. Gus never should have let him talk him into checking out that dried out well, though.

My entry for the 2009 Whumpathon


Categories: Pre-season
Characters: Gus, Shawn
Genres: Angst, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2295 Read Count: 2985
[Report This] Published: March 08, 2009 Updated: March 08, 2009
Reviewer: Insertwittynamehere Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh Mia! Where was this wondrous fic hiding all this time?!

...and that scared him almost as much as the fact that he could hardly stand on his feet. Shawn was never delirious. He was always sharp, always with it. His brain always worked a thousand miles a minute, and Gus could always count on  him to see everything, to know everything, and to draw complicated conclusions in the time it took normal people to form a coherent sentence.

I love that bit - it sums up how Gus sees Shawn and how Shawn's deduction skills are just... him you know? Like they make up his personality :D 

Man I love you. Can't believe I didn't see this to begin with o.O 

LC x

The Accident by kerravon Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

My entry to the 2009 Whumpathon. 

A rain-slick city street, a drunk driver, an irate detective and a 'psychic' who tends to act without thinking...oh, this can't end well.


Categories: Season
Characters: Henry, Juliet, Lassiter, Shawn
Genres: Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4329 Read Count: 7711
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2009 Updated: March 14, 2009
Reviewer: Insertwittynamehere Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Trauma Room

*slaps* you did NOT just leave it there and not update for ages D: I loved it :D I think people should go into Trauma room stuffz more often. XD

WHOOOO!

now update.

XD

LC x

Summary:

Shawn is captured by bank robbers.  Even if he gets away, he may not be the same afterwards.

Written for the Whumpathon 2009.


Categories: Season
Characters: Buzz, Gus, Henry, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, OMC, Shawn
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Suspense
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3607 Read Count: 16445
[Report This] Published: March 14, 2009 Updated: May 14, 2009
Reviewer: Insertwittynamehere Signed
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Shot

D: zomgDG can't believe I missed this one :P so glad I found it complete though ;) now I don't haz to wait xD

Author's Response:

I can't believe it either!! ... Actually, I can't believe I never responded. Haha And yes, that's the happy thing about finding fics after they were posted awhile. :D

Reviewer: Insertwittynamehere Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The Surprise

LOL shirt xD

aha well done both of joo, love it so far! *continues avidly reading*



Author's Response: YAY Loz likes! *pounces*

Reviewer: Insertwittynamehere Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The Opposite

OMG heeee! I love the whole opposite Shawn thing. Srsly, it's THE oddest thing to imagine :P

Author's Response:

It is, isn't it? It's so amusing as well. ~Kristy

(In case you're wondering, my sister made me come reply to these old reviews. Apparently the archive makes the certain author who posted the chapter respond and blocks the coauthors from responding to ones for that particular chapter. :) I apologize we didn't till now.)

Reviewer: Insertwittynamehere Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: The Other Opposite

Ahhhhh only Shawn ^_^ Loved it guys haha. So sweet and awesome xD *claps*


Author's Response: :) Thank you so much for the sweet review, Insertwittynamehere! ~Kristy

Summary:

Shawn's a dad and nobody knows...including him! When the kid shows up at the Psych office one night, what will Shawn do? And how does he keep such a big thing from so many people?

Juliet's friend from college died, leaving behind a young daughter...and Juliet was named guardian! What will she do with a toddler and a full time job? And who will she trust with this big secret?

There are now pictures at the intros of chapters 1 and 3

 
Categories: Season, Post-season, Alternate Universe
Characters: Buzz, Gus, Henry, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, OFC, Shawn
Genres: Casefile, Fluff, General, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: The Real Reason She Left Miami, A dad is born
Series: Secret Children
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12065 Read Count: 46183
[Report This] Published: March 26, 2009 Updated: April 27, 2009
Reviewer: Insertwittynamehere Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: You're My WHAT?

Ok whoa whoa whoa WOOSH!
heh. Ok that was just fun to type and hear in my head, but there was an actual  point to it.

I read this chapter and it was so FAST! I mean, I'm a sucker for going straight from point to point when I'm writing stories and have to be reminded to kind of "beef"  it up a little.

I love the concept of it and it has a lot of potential - and I briefly skimmed through the first part of chapter 3 where Juliet is given a kid. Not too sure why but bear with me here. The thing with both is that they've suddenly had a kid thrown at them, suitcase and all and ok, I'll give you your due, in chapter three you DID say that there would be legal documents to sign and whatever, but Child Protection Services would inform someone before leaving a child in their care - background checks, interviews etc. I've never been involved with Child Protection Services, but there are people in my family and friends who are adopted/ been in contact with them, and re-homing (even temporarily) is a lengty process, and if not lengthy, there are lots of checks to ensure the child's safety.

I don't live in  America, but I'm guessing it's  the same over here as it is over there (: If not, in the words of Piers Morgan, I am a doughnut xD... not that I really like him all that much.

Ok rant done if that made any sense what so ever :D

So that's it really
- research
- more description to stop it from being so fast. no one likes a story that drags on though. It's just finding a balance.

Aaaaand that should be all (: I'm not, by any means, a brilliant writer, but feel free to send anything over my way for beta-ing or running through to add some rambly goodness.

As you can tell, I like to ramble.

Ok wrapping up review now. Sorry if this sounds so negative, because all your reviews on my stuff are so lovely and I come here and rant. I'M SORRY!

*clings to*

And if you don't mind my asking - how old are you? Fell free not to answer that, it's just pure curiousity (:

LC x



Author's Response:

I love constructive criticism! I actually didn't research about CPS, and I usually research everything! Guess I'll never make the mistake of not researching again. 

Sorry that it's so fast! I actually tried to slow it down forever ago when I wrote it, but slow isn't my strong point at all in any way. (I have ADHD, everything I do is a-mile-a-minute)

I don't mind your asking, me and Zapato were 15 and 13 when I wrote this (with her help on some details).