Penname: deMona [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: April 07, 2007
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Not a writer myself (nasty habit of not finishing things, see), but I have posted some of my ideas as challenges, so please do follow the link below to check those out.


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Summary:

Shawn/Juliet

Juliet's eyes brim with unshed tears. "I couldn't handle it if you didn't say it back."


Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Juliet, Shawn
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2824 Read Count: 2087
[Report This] Published: July 04, 2007 Updated: July 04, 2007
Reviewer: deMona Signed
Date: July 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

When I first saw that this was another Shules fic, I was like "ugh!  enough!"  but this surprised me, I love it.  And its great that you included everyone.  

 

Can't wait to see more from you! 



Author's Response: Lol. Yeah, you gotta expect the Shules fics on here, everybody loves em' together. Thanks for the compliment, though.

Summary:

When Juliet discovers the joys of playing mind games with Shawn, Gus wants a piece of the action, too. Meanwhile, a baby has been stolen and his father murdered, leading detectives to suspect a shady adoption agency.


Categories: Season
Characters: Shawn
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4895 Read Count: 4071
[Report This] Published: July 05, 2007 Updated: September 28, 2007
Reviewer: deMona Signed
Date: July 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Table for Two

Ha!  Shawn totally got what was coming to him.  and Car Chase!  this is exciting- can't wait for more! XD

Two's Company by centipede Rated: eT starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 59]
Summary: Past Featured Story

It seemed, as it so often does, a good idea at the time. But there's company for dinner, and Shawn's not exactly sure how he got from point A to point B.

But then eating at Dad's has always been like that.

Awards:
Categories: Season, Short
Characters: Henry, Lassiter, Shawn
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11364 Read Count: 8034
[Report This] Published: July 09, 2007 Updated: August 17, 2007
Reviewer: deMona Signed
Date: July 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Look Who's Coming For Dinner

I love it, I love it, I love it.  I've been sick for two days and there really isn't anything like great fanfic to make me feel better.  You had me laughing out loud and getting pissed off with Shawn practically at the same time.  Can't imagine anyone could have done this better.   Very clever dialogue, and sweet twist at the end.  Thank you!!!!!! I literally can't wait for the next part...  ')

 

PS.  The hurling of death usually involves pointy, and/or very heavy objects.   Possibly voodoo. 



Author's Response:

See, now, I think you're going to have to depend on voodoo.  The hurling of pointy and/or heavy objects doesn't seem as if it will do much more than ruin your computer.  Fortunately, you have no locks of hair or other personal items from myself, which makes me appreciate the internet just a little more than usual.

I'm so glad you liked it.  I was really nervous about what you'd think, especially after I held off on the upload date so long.  LOL is an awesome compliment when used as a literal statement of fact.  And Shawn is such a turd--what pissed you off specifically?  I hope that the pissing you off was a good thing *grins hopefully*.

I'd hoped you'd like that twist.  Thank Luna for her inadvertent triggering of the idea :).  And I will say, quite honestly, that I have no idea when the next part will be up.

That statement should hold up, at least.

Reviewer: deMona Signed
Date: July 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Look Who's Coming For Dinner

Author's Response:

See, now, I think you're going to have to depend on voodoo.  The hurling of pointy and/or heavy objects doesn't seem as if it will do much more than ruin your computer.  Fortunately, you have no locks of hair or other personal items from myself, which makes me appreciate the internet just a little more than usual.

I'm so glad you liked it.  I was really nervous about what you'd think, especially after I held off on the upload date so long.  LOL is an awesome compliment when used as a literal statement of fact.  And Shawn is such a turd--what pissed you off specifically?  I hope that the pissing you off was a good thing *grins hopefully*.

I'd hoped you'd like that twist.  Thank Luna for her inadvertent triggering of the idea :).  And I will say, quite honestly, that I have no idea when the next part will be up.

That statement should hold up, at least.

 

******

Haha, pissed off is too strong a word.  It was more getting *really* frustrated right along with Shawn.  But yeah, he's a turd, sometimes, and deserves what he gets.  Of course, so does Henry, and does he ever really get his, either?   Like father, like son.  They both need so much to be in control.  (We know why Shawn is like that- wouldn't it be interesting to see Grandpa Spencer some day?)  I'm so glad that you at least made Shawn feel bad for what he said to Henry, and realize why he said it.  Kinda saves him.

 

Again, I am just *dying* for this next part.  Take pity.  Or make it *really* long.  Hehe.  (can you blame me for milking it?)  :DDD 



Author's Response:

Ohhhh--I didn't realize you meant pissed *with* Shawn, rather than pissed with him in the *at* sense.  As in, "really pissed at Shawn."  Ha!  Shows my level of reading comprehension pretty well.

Henry never really does get his.  Only, sort of, sometimes.  Shawn gives it to him when he can.  This particular dinner it probably didn't help any that it was two on one.  Poor, poor Shawn *does not feel sorry for him at all, rather gleefully delighted at his predicament, which makes me a far more wicked person than I've always tried to present myself as, I'm afraid*

Oh, man.  Grandpa Spencer, if he's still alive, has got to be one of those ornery old farts who spends most of his days gumming his toothless mouth and hiding in the bushes with the hose for neighborhood kids that wander in a little too close.  Laughs like a wheezy set of bagpipes and has the fiercest, most terrifying glare you've ever seen.  Probably scares Shawn half to death.

Shawn seems to have a knee-jerk reaction to being flustered.  I don't think he ever tries to push people too far, he just talks (and acts) without thinking.  I wanted to get a bit of that across, and I'm glad it seems to have worked.  Somewhat :).

Hahaha--don't die too quickly.  I've got a bit of it (the middle part, actually, for some odd reason) written, but I'm not quite happy with it.  I think you'll have to make do with it being long, rather than soon *grins*

Reviewer: deMona Signed
Date: August 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Look Who's Coming For Dinner

*whine* It's been almost a month? 

Author's Response:

*Fiiine*

I may have put up the chapter five minutes ago :)

Reviewer: deMona Signed
Date: August 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Saturday Night Out

Amused?  I'm positively tickled.  I love the dynamics you do so well between these three.  -Henry trying to be a hard ass, but unable to stop the father in himself really caring (for a second, though, I was afraid he might actually still make Shawn wait 'til he'd finally gotten those five fish.  But I think it's a good bet he'll be bringing that challenge up again at a later date.  Even it is over a decade like that damned dog house).  And Lassie- he's just a gooey marshmallow, isn't he?  Yeah, not quite.  But he has his moments.  And every exasperated eye-roll is worth it.  I really cracked up at Shawn getting all giggly when drunk.  It doesn't get any better.  

Damn, of all the things you could thing to do to him, though?  I've seen those four-prong hooks.  Ouch.  And, you know what? Ever since I saw Funny Farm (Chevy Chase classic, hilarious), where that guy gets hooked in the neck, I've been mortally afraid of that happening.  So thanks for reinforcing that particular fear.  Really.  And those descriptions of the blood and gore and spit?  Thanks especially for that.  *grins*

And you brought in Vick and the baby!  And hubby too!  You *are* something-slightly-less-blasphemous-than God.    and this- "You look diff'rent w'hen you hold her, " he finally said.  he watched them both for another long moment.  "Softer," he explained.   Was just the sweetest thing he could have said, for it's simplicity and him being drunk when he says it. 

Thank you, thank you, thank you for writing for me.  Have I told you enough how awesome you are?  You rock.  

One last thing-

"Well," he broke the silence.  "At least I ha'ven't been tortured, b'eaten, shot, drugged, drow'ned, b'lown u'p, struck by lightning, run o'fer in my motorcycle, run over b'y my m'otorcycle, used in ex'eriments designed to enhance clair'oyance, and/or 'een kidnapped in an ela'borate scheme meant to v'isit rev'enge on my father."

Check.  Check.  Check.  Check.  and.... Check.  but, wait a minute, I don't think I've seen him struck by lightning.  Or run over by his motorcycle.  I need.  Is anybody reading this??  *smirk*



Author's Response:

Hahahahahaha--I didn't even think about that.  But if it had been any less gory, he probably would have made Shawn wait utnil he'd caught those five fish.  There's no doubt that he's still not going to help Shawn until he does it either.  He'll just have to wait for him to get over his hangover :).

Only, being Henry, he probably won't.

Ha!  Yeah, Lassie the gooey marshmallow...he tries, he really does.  I try and push him into all these mushy shapes, but he's as unbending as concrete.  But he did let me write in a smile at the very end, so it's all good.

Yeah, there wasn't honestly going to be any blood.  Or piercings of the face.  And then when it did go in, I didn't originally plan to put in so many disgusting description on the blood/spit mix....

As you can see, it sort of snowballed *grins*.  Gore factor aside (and Chevy Chase references--that made me laugh; i'd forgotten ;) ) I'm glad you could enjoy it.  So you're very, very welcome.  I'm just trying to get you over your fear...or...something.

Loved throwing in Karen.  Part of the gore-factor was that I saw a perfect way to slip her in.  I absolutely adore the woman (and her family! even though we haven't seen them enough) and I was happy to rise to the challenge.  Slightly-less-blasphemous-than-God?  Oh yes I am *cheshire grin*

No problem at all.  i really enjoyed writing this, and I'm glad I could do something to thank you for you contribution.  Psych fans, as a general rule, rock all around!

yeah, I've been whining at Emily to update the one where Shawn is struck by lightning (is there nothing we can do to him?), but it's had no effect so far.  I willl have to double my efforts.  And I keep thinking of Shawn getting run over by his motorcycle and I just laugh and laugh and laugh.

Srsly.  Is anyone reading this?

*grins*

Reviewer: deMona Signed
Date: August 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Look Who's Coming For Dinner

Heh, heh, I just remembered the one where he gets struck by lightning.  She needs to update. XD

Author's Response:

Dood YES.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Shawn is investigating the murder of a highly respected psychiatrist when some odd behavior and a near death experience leave him shaken.

And the fact that he finds himself face to face with the murderer doesn't help the situation.

Awards:
Categories: Season
Characters: Buzz, Gus, Henry, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, OMC, Shawn
Genres: Drama, Humor, Mystery
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16904 Read Count: 39858
[Report This] Published: July 11, 2007 Updated: September 20, 2007
Reviewer: deMona Signed
Date: July 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: And every time we cross those lines

This is just like a real episode.  Awesome.  Please update soon?

Author's Response: Awww, thanks!  I appreciate the review!  I'll update as soon as possible :)

Summary: Just an interruption by Shawn on a rather slow... slow... sloooooow day.

Categories: Season
Characters: Juliet, Lassiter, Shawn
Genres: Fluff, Humor
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1806 Read Count: 1223
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2007 Updated: July 16, 2007
Reviewer: deMona Signed
Date: July 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Not cheesy at all!  That was really cute.  And a great start.. *hint, hint*  I would love to see what happens during the Jason marathon. *grin*

Summary: A young rookie cop moves in with Henry, he's everything Henry wanted in a son, how will Shawn react?
Categories: Season
Characters: Gus, Henry, Shawn
Genres: Angst, Drama, General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10270 Read Count: 19424
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2007 Updated: August 08, 2007
Reviewer: deMona Signed
Date: July 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ouch.  Why can't they just get along?

Well, yeah, cuz there wouldn't be awesome fanfic like this.  Good mystery.  More soon?