Penname: girlinpink44 [Contact] Real name: MH
Member Since: December 04, 2012
Membership status: Member
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Just a Dreamer starting to live my dreams.

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Summary:

There are all types of criminals. Some are super cool art thieves.  Some are big brothers who happen to be badass spies.  Some are personalities that live inside innocent dudes who are, on the whole, pretty decent people.  But then there are the bad ones.  The murderers.  The game masters.  The ones that enjoy cruelty and thrive on hurt.  Shawn Spencer has helped to put away all of them. 

He never thought there would be a criminal he couldn't beat.

He never thought he'd be drawn into a crime that would stain him with its atrocity.

How can he be the good guy... when he's done something so bad?

...unforgivable... 

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Categories: Season
Characters: Gus, Henry, Juliet, Lassiter, Maddie Spencer, Shawn
Genres: Horror, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Graphic Violence, Sensitive Material
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107528 Read Count: 39467
[Report This] Published: April 02, 2009 Updated: June 05, 2016
Reviewer: girlinpink44 Signed
Date: June 15, 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Reaching a Boiling Point

It had been awhile since I read this, and now I'm finally caught up again. But this story is incredible in the sense that you make it realistic. From the scenes at the beginning to the pain of the whole group as we waited to see that Shawn was recovering, I was clicking next time and time again until I realized I should go to bed.

I'm curious where you are going with this but the writing is good and the way you slid references to the show in to give this a sense of time makes it work.

Keep it up!

Author's Response: *gleeeee!!!* Thank you so much!! This story has been a massive challenge from the start! I'm SO thrilled by the response I've gotten and every review has been a huge delight! You make it so incredibly worth it to keep going! I would say I "mostly" have a plan - but I'm somewhat waiting for the characters to show me what they want to do, also.  I've been letting them take the lead through most of this (maybe why it's taken me so long haha!!)  But I'm determined to have an update soon!! *hugs*

Summary: A young woman becomes the center of attention for grisly accidents. But there might be more than meets the eye when she starts learning the secrets of her past.
Categories: Season
Characters: Gus, Henry, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, OFC, Shawn
Genres: Action/Adventure, Casefile, Supernatural
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 142835 Read Count: 12172
[Report This] Published: October 02, 2012 Updated: December 15, 2012
Reviewer: girlinpink44 Signed
Date: December 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Deja Vu

It's always fun to see a writer take these characters and throw them into a crazy situation, yet not completely alter the fundamental make up of their characters. In this story, you've done just that.

I was worried when I saw the time skip. The biggest thing is don't info dump. Work it into dialogue subtly. But I'm interested in seeing how this continues. Dynamics change in three years and it may take a few chapters to get fully back into the story. I have a feeling you won't do this, but don't rush it.

Author's Response: Oh wow thank you. And yup I have plans on getting back into the story little by little not rushing it XD things should get interesting

Summary:

Sequel to Patron Saints of Liars and Fakes & What Was Ever Really Special About Me Anyway?

Shawn Spencer awakes to find that his world has literally been turned upside down.


Categories: Post-season, Alternate Universe
Characters: Buzz, Gus, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, Maddie Spencer, OFC, Shawn
Genres: Angst, Drama, Fluff, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: Trust Is Earned
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27791 Read Count: 5088
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2012 Updated: April 05, 2013
Reviewer: girlinpink44 Signed
Date: December 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have to say, you worked this well. But he'll have to find out sooner or later won't he. But I'm sure you have a plan.

I love the funny Shawn that came out in the hospital. It's great that even though you are putting them through all of this, you are letting them still be them.

I'll keep reading can't wait to see more.

Summary: Lassiter has finally found himself a new girlfriend. His life is going well, relatively speaking. Until his ex-wife suddenly reappears in his life and both women are harassed by a hardened criminal who wants nothing more than to get revenge on the Santa Barbara detective who arrested him...



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Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Buzz, Gus, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, OFC, Other, Shawn, Victoria Parker
Genres: Drama, General, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: Lassie Face!
Series: Witness Protection
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54856 Read Count: 20371
[Report This] Published: December 05, 2012 Updated: August 01, 2013
Reviewer: girlinpink44 Signed
Date: December 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I've been enjoying these so much! It's fun to see the softer side of Lassie. But at the same time, there is still that grump that we all know and love. Can't wait to read more, these are fun! Odd little picky thing, I guess since there isn't an italics option you put it in quotes but are thoughts quoted?

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I'm very glad you enjoyed it. I think it's fun to write multiple sides of a person. After all, Lassiter isn't a robot, even though he tries to act like one sometimes; he's a human being with feelings of his own. Some of the fics I've read sort of put Lassiter into a little box where he only acts the same every time he appears in the story, but what fun is that? And yeah, I do put thoughts in quotes. I know you're not supposed to do that, but I don't actually write this on a computer. I write it on an IPod in my spare moments, and IPods do not have italics, so I don't have much of a choice. But to avoid confusion, if it's a thought, I will use the specific word "thought." If I don't say "he/she thought," then it's a spoken line and not a thought. Make sense? :-) Thanks so much for reading! :-)

Summary:

Shawn was always a big fan of Christmas, until having the worst one in his life. When he wakes up the next day he finds out it never happened! What is Shawn to do when he realizes he has to redo the same day over and over, maybe forever?

A response to Checkerz's challenge. Happy Holidays!


Categories: Season, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bill Guster, Buzz, Gus, Henry, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, Shawn, Winnie Guster
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Casefile, Crack!, General, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Supernatural, Suspense
Warnings: Major Spoilers
Challenges: Whump For the Holidays, Where's The Remote So I Can Change Today?, Psych Do-Over
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26915 Read Count: 5768
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2012 Updated: January 10, 2013
Reviewer: girlinpink44 Signed
Date: January 02, 2013 Title: Chapter 5: If You Gotta Shoot, Aim High

I think you did do a good job at showing all the crazy things Shawn would do. You gave us some bits a pieces and we can fill in the rest.

This story, is so addicting plus I always have a soft spot for stories that cause Shawn to grow as a character. Can't wait to see what happens but keep it up.

Desperation really has set in if he goes to Lassie for help. And I love how you brought it back to being Lassie's fault that Shawn had to lie in the first place.

Author's Response: :D I always thought, as much as Lassie wants to expose Shawn as a fraud, he never really acknowledges that it is his fault in the first place. I had to put that in there. I am trying to throw subtle character development in for Shawn, it has only been less than a year so far so I am not going to have him do a complete 180...yet. 

Summary: The Santa Barbara Police Department receive a blast from the past! Killers return, friends return and there are secrets from Shawn's past are brought to the surface.


Categories: Season
Characters: Gus, Henry, Juliet, Lassiter, OMC, Shawn
Genres: Angst, Drama, Suspense
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85210 Read Count: 15558
[Report This] Published: January 02, 2013 Updated: December 26, 2013
Reviewer: girlinpink44 Signed
Date: January 02, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: The Hour Killer

I've been reading this on FanFiction and love it! It's one of those stories that pushes the characters but doesn't do it in a way that messes with the core makeup of them.

Can't wait to see how this goes!

Summary: When something from Sydney's past comes to Santa Barbara, a secret she's been hiding will be revealed. This is a sequel to my fanfic, Sydney.
Categories: Post-season, Alternate Universe
Characters: Buzz, Gus, Henry, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, Maddie Spencer, Marlowe, OFC, OMC, Shawn
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: None
Series: Sydney
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20949 Read Count: 3494
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2013 Updated: March 14, 2013
Reviewer: girlinpink44 Signed
Date: March 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 5: My Crime Scene

no! I didn't even notice that! Thanks for pointing it out! Fixed it!

Summary:

Even though Shawn knew in his heart that the harrowing ordeal that had been centered around an extremely unlikely, and frankly ugly, object wasn’t completely over, or that he was really just marking time until the true culprit made his or her next move, even he wasn’t expecting the resulting events to play out in such a, well, unbelievable way.  When a little old lady comes into the Psych office to ask the duo to track down her nephew in a nearby college town, Shawn never expected to find himself thrown right back into the same situation that he’d just gotten out of, but this time, he’s completely on his own in a strange city......or is he?  After all, unbelievable things seem to happen to Shawn all the time.  

Sequel to Beyond the Strange Chance



Categories: Season
Characters: Buzz, Gus, Henry, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, OFC, OMC, Shawn
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Suspense
Warnings: None
Challenges: On Your Marks, Get Set....WHUMP!
Series: Under the Stranger Luck
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93220 Read Count: 21409
[Report This] Published: February 25, 2013 Updated: September 28, 2013
Reviewer: girlinpink44 Signed
Date: July 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 21: We Scattered all the Pieces when We couldn’t just Leave well enough Alone.

Should I admit that I log on several times on Sundays waiting to see if you update?

I love the different layers this sequel adds to the original. Can't wait to see where this goes.

Author's Response: xD  You can go ahead and admit that...I tend to visit the home page several times a day to see who's updated, no shame in that.  I've tried really hard with the timing and the continuity between the two stories, and thank you so very much for the review <3

Summary: What happens when an ex-CIA agent, psychic detective and his girlfriend, pharmaceutical salesmen, head detective, former cop and an entire precinct are held hostage in their own station?

Story 3 in the Sydney Series.
Categories: Alternate Universe, Post-season
Characters: Buzz, Gus, Henry, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, Maddie Spencer, Marlowe, OFC, OMC, Shawn
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Humor, Mystery
Warnings: None
Series: Sydney
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29831 Read Count: 4606
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2013 Updated: January 17, 2014
Reviewer: girlinpink44 Signed
Date: March 24, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Hostage Situations 101

I hope so! I see bits and pieces in my head and hopefully I write it as funny as it is in my head

Summary: The first and second generation of psychics, junior detectives, pharmaceutical salesmen, and Lassie's inadvertently team up to solve a missing person's case, all while learning the importance of parenthood and adolescence.
Categories: Post-season
Characters: Buzz, Gus, Henry, Juliet, Lassiter, Maddie Spencer, Marlowe, OFC, Other, Shawn
Genres: Action/Adventure, Casefile, Drama, Fluff, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39383 Read Count: 10924
[Report This] Published: June 09, 2013 Updated: June 27, 2013
Reviewer: girlinpink44 Signed
Date: June 21, 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Worst Eulogy in History

Sad Jules mades everyone sad!!

This is so fun to read! I love how you've written the kids!