Penname: mary-lou [Contact] Real name:
Member Since: February 04, 2008
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so far im just a reader but who knows?
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Summary:

When the Psych cast goes on a yacht for the wedding of a colleague, murder follows. Trapped on a yacht with a killer, Shawn, Juliet, Gus, Lassiter and Karen are faced with the difficult task of catching the murderer. There is nowhere for the killer to hide from the police, but there is also nowhere for the yacht’s occupants to hide from the killer.

Pairings: Shawn/Juliet, Gus/OC

Awards:
Categories: Season
Characters: Gus, Henry, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, OFC, OMC, Other, Shawn
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84108 Read Count: 91706
[Report This] Published: February 12, 2007 Updated: September 22, 2007
Reviewer: mary-lou Signed
Date: February 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

i really like this story so far, well done. one thing though, are you a lost fan by any chance? b/c you used the names Jack and Kate and Evangeline and it just sort of hit me once i saw jack and kate together.

Author's Response:

People are really good at catching that haha. Yeah, I am a Lost fan. I used 'Jack' and 'Kate'  in the story because I couldn't think of any better names and Lost was really making me angry with the stuff with Kate/Sawyer at the time (it has gotten a little better I guess lol). The Evangeline character was actually based off of a OLTL character who had that name, so that wasn't meant to be a Lost reference, but I found that a lot of people connected 'Evangeline' with 'Jack' and 'Kate' and figured out that I watch Lost lol. Sorry for the late response to your review. I haven't been on Psychfic lately due to a hectic schedule with school. I hope to have more time to visit this site real soon though. Thanks for the review! :)

Summary:

Today:  I believe...that we are responsible for what we do, no matter how we feel.

  
 

Since I am done with the 100 themes, I am tackling the I BELIEVE challenge now. Each will still be a one shot, the prompt will be the chapter title. 

I'll post warnings if/when they're required.

Awards:
Categories: Pre-season, Season, Post-season
Characters: Buzz, Gus, Henry, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, Other, Shawn
Genres: Angst, Drama, Fluff, General, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Missing Scene, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Tear Jerker
Challenges: 100 Themes, "I Believe..."
Series: None
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 117788 Read Count: 517818
[Report This] Published: November 18, 2007 Updated: March 23, 2010
Reviewer: mary-lou Signed
Date: February 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 65: Kick in the Head

aww little shawn in love? how cute! i can just picture him with a sad and confused face.

Reviewer: mary-lou Signed
Date: February 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 73: Give Up

lol. i love shawn being a little trickster before he can really even talk, especially when its to his dad.

Author's Response: Thanks! :-) lol. Henry should've known better than to mess with the blankie! 

Summary:

What if Shawn and Juliet met earlier before Shawn went back to Santa Barbara?

okay so i've decided to also put this to the 100 THEME CHALLENGE ;)


Categories: Pre-season, Season, Alternate Universe
Characters: Juliet, Shawn
Genres: Fluff, General, Humor
Warnings: None
Challenges: 100 Themes
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8616 Read Count: 32841
[Report This] Published: November 18, 2007 Updated: January 13, 2009
Reviewer: mary-lou Signed
Date: February 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: #11 Memory

i liked it. i was confused at first and wondering how you were going to fit that scene in right with the background you wrote so far, but it turned out really good. the only thing is that im a bit confused of when the last time she saw shawn was.

Author's Response:

hmm..when was the last time...you know i haven't figured that out as yet..oh wait that would be when she graduated...back at the first chpt..Drive..yup

THANK YOU!

Summary:

Yep - I took on the 100 Themes Challenge, too. I'm even going to do them in order. Want to know what my common theme is?

Angst.

What else did you expect? 


Categories: Short, Pre-season, Season, Post-season
Characters: Buzz, Gus, Henry, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, Other, Shawn
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, General, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Suspense
Warnings: Character Death, Tear Jerker
Challenges: 100 Themes
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30912 Read Count: 60588
[Report This] Published: December 01, 2007 Updated: April 15, 2008
Reviewer: mary-lou Signed
Date: April 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 29: #29: Happiness

very cute chapter. its really weird to imagine them that much in the future and a bit scary. and i just LOVE dumbledore!

Author's Response: Yeah, future fics are always fun. XD And yay for getting the Dumbledore blib! XD

Reviewer: mary-lou Signed
Date: February 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 24: #24: No Time

i love love the idea of an angry juliet going off on this guy and how she just wanted him to resist arrest so she could do it.

Author's Response: It was fun to write. XD Thanks for reviwing - glad to hear you liked it!

Reviewer: mary-lou Signed
Date: February 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 23: #23: Cat

aww thats cute. i think its funny how Juliet's cats don't like Shawn. good work, i love your stuff. can't wait for that horse chapter.

Author's Response: Yeah, this popped into my head and I just wrote it down like crazy! XD That horse chapter might be a while, though. Anyway, I'm glad to hear you liked it!

Reviewer: mary-lou Signed
Date: February 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 25: #25: Trouble Lurking

damn Gus was pissed. i really like his way at retaliating though. smoothies gone to waste, the pineapple abused, "Oh, god…what have they done to you, my friend?" so funny, and then pineapples dripping blood and pineapple juice, gus really got him where it hurts. lol. loved it.

Author's Response: I love pineapple (that was what drew me to the show in the first place), but I've wanted to torture it for a long, long time! XD Glad ot hear you liked it. Thanks for reviewing!

Summary: Hey, I thought I would jump the bandwagon and do Windcryer's 100 Challenges. Everyone else has, why not me?
Categories: Pre-season, Season, Post-season
Characters: Juliet
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 67 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40802 Read Count: 106242
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2007 Updated: May 14, 2008
Reviewer: mary-lou Signed
Date: February 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 86. Seeing Red

this is really starting to get interesting. although its gotten away from one shots, im very intriged by this storyline. i really want to know though is how much better Gus's memory is getting. I can't wait to have the old Gus back!

Author's Response:

It is improving, although he still believes that Shawn is really pyschic.  Soon he will remember the truth.

Reviewer: mary-lou Signed
Date: February 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49 13. Misfortune

That winsome smile that hides that sad Jamician clown. love that quote. and i also like the mentioning of dule hill, nice touch

Author's Response: That quote about the winsome smile is not mine.  That came from the season finale: Shawn (and Gus) of the Dead. I had to have the closed captioning on and run it three times to get what James said to Dule in convincing him to stay on in the case.  I thought it would be funny to mention Dule since poor Gus thought the Captain looked like Buffalo Bill because Ted Levine played him.