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1. A high schooler who wandered onto this website one day and hasn't left for almost two years. It took her all of these two years to update her bio.
2. One who often goes by the name Pat. She loves television, especially Psych, Supernatural, and White Collar. She also loves reading and writing, and still does write, though it's more original stuff than fanfiction these days.
3. Someone known to be a bit cracked, but is somehow endearing to her friends anyway.
4. One who has a tendancy to write angst or fluff, but tends to end up writing a bit of everything.
5. A person who loves Psych.
Awards: Best Reviewer
Characters: Gus, Shawn
Genres: Drama, Supernatural, Suspense
Warnings: Graphic Violence
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8947 Read Count: 4888
Date: October 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: For the Good of the World
I loved how Gus's visions were so vivid; I could really see them in my head. There is something nagging at me though: If Gus was holding the lamp while he electrocuted the guy wouldn't he get zapped too? Just a thought. Anyways, I liked the story and how it was a nice spin off of the usual character-gets-psychic-powers deal.
Characters: Gus, Henry, Lassiter, Shawn
Genres: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery
Warnings: Graphic Violence
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23206 Read Count: 57287
Date: January 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Mmm, love this, as always. I love how you reveal the memory, and how Gus is scared of Shawn as he gets lost in his rage. It's an amazing revealation, and I find myself on the edge of my seat waiting for what will happen next. Great job with the characters, I think they are very in character, especially considering what a serious moment this is. Love it, can't wait for more! =)
Date: March 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
For chapter 10, I REALLY love the idea of the nursery. It's SUCH a great and cute idea and I loved it.
And YAAAAAAAY you updated! ^.^
This chapter was awesome. I loved the unexpectedness of the car ride home with Henry, and I literally cringed at the amount of pain that Shawn was going through. God, I really felt for him there. This line in particular really got me:
The faint track of tear marks from the pain of what most have been the world’s worst migraine explained what Shawn wanted with the sunglasses.
GAHHHHHHHHHHH, POOR GUY!!! ;_; I feel so bad for him!
And another brilliant move: Henry's touch being able to calm the storm. That's just brilliant, absolutely genius! I LOVED that!
Amazing chapter, great psychic angst, and lovely father/son bonding. Please update again soon!
And P.S. I hear you about the whole posting thing. Posting on PF can be a bitch sometimes, let me tell you. I post using Times New Roman font, which doesn't look as good as the PF font, but it doesn't require me to post it a billion times. Maybe that will help?
Shawn can't resist sharing his happiness.
Drabbley type things concerning the romantic-ness dangling between Shawn and Juliet, because dude, who doesn't see that coming?Awards:
Categories: Season, Short
Characters: Gus, Juliet, Shawn
Genres: Fluff, General, Humor, Romance
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47308 Read Count: 157388
Date: January 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 44: Evidence
AWWWW! That was so cute! I love all of your description of what Juliet is feeling and how the kiss plays out. I think it's a perfect story about their first kiss. My favorite part however, was the Omundson case. XDDDDDDDDD Yay for Psych references! Very cute Luna, I loved it! :)
Author's Response: XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD Thank you so much patster! LOLOL I forgot that was in there. XDDDDDDDD I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :D
Shawn suddenly finds himself with real psychic powers, but they're not all that they're cracked up to be. And when he finds that he can't deal with his work anymore, will he be able to come back long enough to save a small girl? No shippings.
Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Buzz, Gus, Henry, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, Shawn
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Humor, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Sensitive Material
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40991 Read Count: 36615
Date: October 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
It may be because I'm feeling sad today, but the chapter where Shawn admitted to Henry what he went through made me cry. I can't imagine the kind of hurt that Shawn went through, though trying makes me sniffle.
Shawn didn't want to feel. Feeling hurt.
That is my favorite line, because I understand what he's saying. Sometimes you just get bombarded with other people's feelings and your own, and it becomes a lot to handle. You captured the hurt of that exactly.
Congrats on your amazing fic!
Date: December 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
OMG you posted!! *happy dance*
I'm really glad you are continued this, I totally love this story. The paragraphing is a little hard to read though, and I wish that you posted more small paragraphs then two large ones. Because I like whump, I would like a little more description of Shawn's wounds, and because I think it would also justify Juliet's murderous thoughts a little more, since she normally doesn't like to kill people. These are just little things I noticed, and my opinion, so feel free to disregard them.
What I really love about this story is the emotion of it. You put Shawn in such an unreal situation, yet everything he feels seems like what he would feel in that situation. All the emotions are so real, and I find myself feeling them alongside Shawn. It's very nicely described too, and I find myself on the edge of my seat wondering what happens. Cammy is a wonderful OC, and she really brings out Shawn's more responsible side. She also has him wondering if he even can save this girl, as he's wounded and can't sense anymore. Plus, she's downright adorable, like when she asks Shawn if he's mad at her, that's such a kid thing to do. On a side note, SHAWN WHUMP! :) I love all the angst and whump in this, and can't wait to see how you finish it. I'm really hoping for more Shawn/Henry interaction, as I loved the dream scene with them, and that was my favorite part of the whole fic, because Shawn finally had to own up to what he felt. I still reread that scene sometimes, because it's simply beautiful.
Amazing job NMD (yeah, I abbriviated), can't wait for the epilogue. Seriously, post soon please, I'm loving this story. :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I love knowing that my story is liked. And, by the way, thanks for commenting on the two long paragraphs, I really didn't mean for that to happen and I fixed it.
Date: January 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue
Again, excellent story NMD, I loved the emotion and hurt that you could feel throughout, and I think it's an amazing fic. I actually like that Shawn keeps one of his abilties, it would be strange for him to live without them. Loved the fic, thanks for providing me with so much entertainment! I can't wait to see more from you! :)
Some of the moments we share with our family members can be the most awkward ones in our lives. This is a collection of drabbles those moments between Henry and Shawn.
Characters: Gus, Henry, OFC, Shawn
Genres: General, Humor
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7016 Read Count: 9643
Date: October 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Shirts
LOL! I love that Shawn was unconsiously mimicking Henry. May I add that the first chapter was pure.... Awkward. You could totally do something where the "Tooth Fairy" comes. I could see that getting awkward once Shawn realizes that Henry is the one collecting his teeth. Anyway, I love awkwardness, keep it coming!
Categories: Season, Alternate Universe
Characters: Gus, Henry, Karen, Lassiter, Shawn
Genres: Angst, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: Graphic Violence, Sensitive Material
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6601 Read Count: 20748
Date: March 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Anger
Gahh, finally, an update! I'm SO glad you're planning on finishing this story. It's really a fantastic angst fic, and all the characters and descriptions are wonderful. I feel for Shawn so much here, and it's all such GOOD angst. Thank you so much for this chapter, please update soon!
Jules is having a bad day, but Shawn cheers her up by showing her that life isn't about trying to wait out the storm, but about learning to dance in the rain.
Categories: Season, Short
Characters: Juliet, Shawn
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2381 Read Count: 1405
Date: October 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Dancing In The Rain
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. That was some awesome Shules. Great job! :)