Penname: patster [Contact] Real name: Pat
Member Since: September 21, 2008
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Pat•ster  [pat-ster]


1. A high schooler who wandered onto this website one day and hasn't left for almost two years. It took her all of these two years to update her bio.

2. One who often goes by the name Pat. She loves television, especially Psych, Supernatural, and White Collar. She also loves reading and writing, and still does write, though it's more original stuff than fanfiction these days.

3. Someone known to be a bit cracked, but is somehow endearing to her friends anyway.

4. One who has a tendancy to write angst or fluff, but tends to end up writing a bit of everything.

5. A person who loves Psych.                                                                


Awards: Best Reviewer
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Reviews by patster
Summary: Response to the Weekly Challenge. I could never back down from a challenge - especially a writing one!
Categories: Short
Characters: Gus, Henry, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, Shawn
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Fluff, General, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Mystery, Romance, Suspense
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5400 Read Count: 80262
[Report This] Published: August 17, 2008 Updated: January 21, 2010
Reviewer: patster Signed
Date: December 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Psychmobile

ROFL! Gus can only whimper at the thought of the Echo in drag racing. And it's also funny to imagine Shawn racing the little car, lol. Great job Mo! :)

Author's Response: Yeah, couldn't resist the drag racing thing! Not very probably, but, hey, it's funny! Thanks!

Reviewer: patster Signed
Date: December 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: One Step at a Time

Oh gosh Mo, you sure know how to make a girl blush.

I've always wanted to know what happened when Shawn saw his hometown again. And with only 100 words you have told me! It's written so well, and it's one of my favs of your 100 words. I love that it's a new beginning for him, a chance for in to start again. I loved it, thanks for posting!! :)

Reviewer: patster Signed
Date: February 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Gus Takes a Break

DUDE, I LOVE IT! I love your subtlety with Shawn's condition, and how you leave it kind of vauge and up to us what happened. Your word choice in this makes every line seem dramatic, and I love how you were able to fit a little mini fic in here. Great job Mo! <3

Author's Response: Thanks so much, pat!!

Reviewer: patster Signed
Date: March 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Water

Wheeeeeeee, Mo, this angst makes me giddy!! Such amazing description, especially with only 100 words! I love the irony of Shawn being surrounded by too much water and still be thirsty. Fantastic 100 words - and a very original whump - I love it!

...Mooooooo, will you please expand on this? *Bambi eyes*

Author's Response: LOL - I like making you giddy! And maybe I'll expand for the whumpathon - we'll see. THANK YOU!

Reviewer: patster Signed
Date: March 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Blackmail

*SQUEE* You've told so much in just 100 words; this feels like a whole fic! I love the idea, and that Gus is the person who brings Shawn and Jules together. LOVED the 100 words Mo, great job!

Author's Response: Thank YOU so much, pat!!!!! You're so great!!

Reviewer: patster Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 40: Gus and Henry

I love how you approached this idea. The last two lines especially really get me here. I just love how sure Henry and Gus are of Shawn! At the end of the day, Henry really does believe in him and knows he can get the job done. And even though they're in a jam, they know Shawn will get them out of it. I love the amount of trust displayed there. Great 100 words, Mo!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you, pat!!! I do like it when Henry shows that belief because, you are right, he really does have faith in him.

Reviewer: patster Signed
Date: August 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 42: Pictures

I love your Lassiter chapters, Mo. :D

I love the idea of this. It's very creative and original. I love how he realizes that it might seem crazy to others, but that he's very proud of his wall of criminals and the empty spaces. They mean he's a dedicated worker, which is something he works very hard for. I LOOOOOOVE the last line like whoaz, it's just perfect. His work really does fill other voids, one of the largest ones being Victoria.

Great take on the prompt, Mo, love it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, pat - I'm glad that you got everything - little afraid I hadn't quite described it correctly or enough. You're great!


100 -200 word moments from the psych universe. My entries for the drabble challenges.

Challenge  7-20 Beach

Shawn - Angst

Categories: Short
Characters: Buzz, Gus, Henry, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, Shawn
Genres: Angst, Drama, Fluff, General, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Suspense
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1600 Read Count: 16918
[Report This] Published: August 17, 2008 Updated: July 20, 2010
Reviewer: patster Signed
Date: November 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 11-24 Are you nervous?

Aw, cute! Nice one Gecko! :)

Reviewer: patster Signed
Date: January 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Challenge 10: Shawn figured it out.

I really love this Gecko. You described Shawn's realization that he needs Gus more then Gus needs him so well, and his fear for Gus's life. I've gotta say though, the hospital bed made your butt look big.

Author's Response: Thank you, Pat. Shawn and Gus's relationship is really so well done on the show and that makes it so interesting to write. As for my butt, it is the hospital gowns they make you wear, it is not my fault.

Reviewer: patster Signed
Date: January 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Challenge 1-26 Happy Birthday!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAH OH MY GOSH VAL!!!!! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! Now, you, the Pioneer of the Last Whumpable Body Part of the great Shawn, just burned off his eyelashes! XDDDD He should really know better then to accept a review from whumpers. Love it, made me laugh SO hard! <3

Author's Response: Thank you, Pat!I know, we find one last thing that needs to be whumped so I just run off and whump it. And yeah, Shawn really should know better. Anyway, thank you again, I am glad it made you laugh.