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1. A high schooler who wandered onto this website one day and hasn't left for almost two years. It took her all of these two years to update her bio.
2. One who often goes by the name Pat. She loves television, especially Psych, Supernatural, and White Collar. She also loves reading and writing, and still does write, though it's more original stuff than fanfiction these days.
3. Someone known to be a bit cracked, but is somehow endearing to her friends anyway.
4. One who has a tendancy to write angst or fluff, but tends to end up writing a bit of everything.
5. A person who loves Psych.
Awards: Best Reviewer
All that could be said of this world was written. Nothing more could be done. But what if… instead of continuing forward, one could go back. What if there was something in your life that could be undone… unwritten. What if you could have a second chance?
This is a sequel to Fury, Rebuilding From Ashes, and Standing from Falling
Categories: Season, Alternate Universe
Characters: Gus, Henry, Shawn
Genres: Drama, Hurt/Comfort, Suspense
Warnings: Graphic Violence, Sensitive Material
Series: Moving On From Breaking Down
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95197 Read Count: 39263
Date: October 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Breaking
OMG. DRAG. WTFWTFWTF HOW ARE YOU SO AMAZING? THE VERY IDEA OF AN ALTERNATE TIMELINE IS EFFING GENIUS. GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. THIS FIC IS SLOWLY KILLING ME FROM AWESOME. YOU GET 10874598347534975349 STARS, JUST UPDATE SOON.
HEAR ME? UPDATE.
Date: February 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Missing Pieces in a Crumbling Puzzle
Oh my god...just...oh my God. ;_; I'm close to tears here. Lassiter's dead? I just...*numb* *completely, utterly numb*
I just about jumped up and down when this was updated, and you BETTER update again soon so I know what the hell's gonna happen to everyone, YA HEAR?!?!
*goes back to rocking back and forth, cursing dragonnan's name*
Date: March 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Vigil of Unreality
Dude, what am I supposed to SAY right now?!?! This chapter was so sad and beautiful and intriguing, I don't know how I can possibly react.
The Juliet part. One word. Beautiful. And sad. So three words. God, is broke my HEART. Imagining Carlton's reaction to her grief, perfect, absolutely PERFECT. And then the realization that he's actually dead. GUHHHHHHHHHHHH. Her grief is so so so freaking heartbreaking and well written! I also love how she feels distant from Shawn's storyline, that's really interesting to me for some reason. And her feeling that something was WRONG felt so right to me -- because something IS wrong! It isn't supposed to be like this, and the consequences of Shawn's choice are impacting everyone.
"You're tougher than this...” Her voice shook out the words and let them fall to the tile. This line almost made Pat cry...something about a character sounding choked when they say soemthing (as I imagined Juliet here) is even worse than them actually crying for me. ;_;
I love the voice taking a physical form, and her being still hidden from Shawn, by not having a face. And I love this character in the fog! I don't even know who they are, but the salute they give Shawn, the smile, it just fills me with a feeling I can't identify. For some reason it makes me think of the Father in The Devil's In the Details...and the Upstairs Bedroom, I have no idea why.
“What gave you... any... right?” Shawn's voice scraped past his teeth in a stiff whisper. Just LOOKING at this line again made me tear up. I feel SO FREAKING MUCH for Shawn here. What gave her ANY right to screw up his life anymore than it already had been? How could she DO something like this to him? The unfairness of it all can be heard in his tone and it's heartbreaking.
And yet I feel sorry for the voice. She tried, she really did, but Shawn's life doesn't seem to have any happy ending in sight (I blame you :P).
And that last line, wow. You've got me SUPER INTRIGUED with that. I'm left all sorts of questions: Who is she (Mae, someone we've never met?)? Is God really behind this, and if not, what else could it be? Can Shawn go back to normal, can ANYTHING in his world be set right again? I can't wait for you to update again, both for the answers, and the powerful emotion you pack into every one of these chapters.
Date: April 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: A Face to the Voice
*insert a thousand profanities here*
Yeah, I don't have much more to say than that. Only that this story grips me in a way that only so few have, that you're awesome, and that I really want you to finish this story.
*screams and swears some more while spazzing*
Date: August 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Best of Both Worlds
Yeah, spazz. Duuuuuuude, Shawn killing himself was amazing (I feel like I should feel bad for saying that). It reminded me so much of the scene in Fury when Shawn tried to kill himself, with the dream like tone, but this time it was for a completely different reason - he was doing it to set his world right instead of just trying to escape it. Nonetheless, the visual image of the scene gave me chiilllls. sdiofgeorghg. Something I found really interesting was Shawn's almost reluctance to leave that world behind - like by going back to his own world he was physically leaving these people. It makes me imagine that in that alternate universe, Shawn really did kill himself, while the Shawn in this universe is okay. *deep thoughts* You always make me think, I love that. I just adored that chapter, how you built up to it so subtly, him saying his goodbyes and grabbing the gun. You never SAY he's going to, but we KNOW, and I just love that!
And this chapter too, wonderful. Shawn getting back to his own world, his own MOTHER (so sweet).AMAZING chapter, AMAZING story, and FREAKING AMAZING *series*. Bravo, Drag.
Categories: Post-season, Alternate Universe
Characters: Gus, Henry, Juliet, Lassiter, OMC, Shawn
Genres: Casefile, Drama, Supernatural
Challenges: A Different Character
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22214 Read Count: 12165
Date: January 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Yay, you updated. I'm loving the story so far, and I like the interesting turn that this has taken. Your last few lines are very dramatic, and they're really great. I love how Liam isn't showing them his drawings, and how his gift is always a bit of a mystery. Love it Paper! =)
Date: January 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Love this chapter Paper, I think you have Henry spot on. I LOVED the dinner scene, and I thought you did a wonderful job of writing it and Liam's guilt over the things that he thinks made happen. I love the conversation in that scene SO much, it was amazing. LOVE love love this chapter Paper, can't wait for more! =)
Date: February 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Great chapter Paper! I love Gus's excitement at Jules being pregnant, and it's so Gus like! I also love that he wants to keep it from Shawn, and that Juliet is going to play along, lol. You really have the characters down, and I love Liam so much! I love his attempts to make pancakes, and not even realize he's failing, because that's just such a little kid thing. I'm excited by Liam's vision, and I can't wait to see what happens with teh mystery here. Love it, can't wait for more Paper! <3
Date: August 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Woohoo update! I liked tihs chapter, Paper, I liked it very much. I love how Shawn and Juliet are REALLY tiptoeing a line here, trying to give Liam enough information to satisfy him, but also let him keep his innocence. I think it's really interesting to see how they both succede and fail in that area. Sick!Shawn also makes me very happy. xDDDD Great chapter, Paper, can't wait for more!
Death is precarious at best. When it happens in the manner of one giving up their life for another, the person left behind can only take it all in and try to understand why.
Characters: Karen, Lassiter, Shawn
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Character Death, Tear Jerker
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 742 Read Count: 1187
Date: December 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: A Distant Echo
I have read the shiny new (old i guess to you) death fic. I'm very glad I did, because it's great! Poor Lassie, so much guilt over Shawn's death. You describe it so well, and the scene is very vivid in my mind. Loved it Stray! :)
Author's Response: Aw, Pat, thank you so much! I wanted to showcase Lassiter\'s guilt and give good descriptions so thanks for commenting on my hard work. :D