Penname: patster [Contact] Real name: Pat
Member Since: September 21, 2008
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Pat•ster  [pat-ster]


1. A high schooler who wandered onto this website one day and hasn't left for almost two years. It took her all of these two years to update her bio.

2. One who often goes by the name Pat. She loves television, especially Psych, Supernatural, and White Collar. She also loves reading and writing, and still does write, though it's more original stuff than fanfiction these days.

3. Someone known to be a bit cracked, but is somehow endearing to her friends anyway.

4. One who has a tendancy to write angst or fluff, but tends to end up writing a bit of everything.

5. A person who loves Psych.                                                                


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My answer to windscryer's 100 Themes challenge- one hundred one-shots? What could be more fun?

Categories: Pre-season, Season, Post-season, Short
Characters: Gus, Henry, Juliet, Lassiter, Shawn
Genres: Angst, Drama, Fluff, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Missing Scene, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: 100 Themes
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17204 Read Count: 23395
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2008 Updated: February 09, 2009
Reviewer: patster Signed
Date: November 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Theme 20: Advertisement

LOL! This was so funny! My favorite line:

"Have you ever lost the television remote? Your car keys? A loved one?

It's just such an abrupt transition from "your car keys" to "a loved one". Great job Sarah! :)

Author's Response: yay thank you! I like that part too :)

Reviewer: patster Signed
Date: December 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 21: Theme 21: Cat

AWWW, it's a cute little kitty! That was freakin' ADORABLE Sarah, amazing job. You pulled off Juliet's thoughts, the dialogue, and THE KISS so well...which I guess means you pulled off everything well. The kiss makes me giggle excitedly just thinking about it, lol. Again, awesome chapter! :)

Author's Response: YAY! I'm glad you liked it :) you were instrumental in the creation, so...thanks for the help and the review! :)

Reviewer: patster Signed
Date: December 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 22: Theme 22: Pain

Yay, my 100 themes! I like it a lot Sarah. (No, I didn't get in too much trouble). SHAWN WHUMP :)

"There's some brain there that I use." ROFL some brain? XDD I love that Henry rubs Shawn's already sore head. And again, SHAWN WHUMP!! ^^ Love it Sarah! :)


Author's Response: pat reviews fill me with exuberant glee! although glee is quite exuberant already...i'll rethink that one. :)

Reviewer: patster Signed
Date: January 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Theme 23: Waiting

I think we can consider this project an absolute success Sarah. :) Now, I better see more chapters like this, you hear? Cause I really loved this chapter.

It was my escape vehicle. When you say this, I think about all the times he's ridden away from a town or problem on that bike, and how it really is his escape vehicle. Love that line.

I like bus stops because I'm not expected to be anything or do anything and, if only for the ten minutes of limbo between ticket buying and boarding, I get to think. My favorite line, hands down. I love that he likes that he's not expected of anything, he can just be who he is. It makes me think about all the times his dad expected something of him that was too much, and that the bus stop is the one place where he doesn't need to live up, or fail to live up, to the expectations of others. I can identify with his feeling of looking forward to the time, however short, of thinking that comes with waiting. It's a nice thing, and I think Shawn would enjoy the time of observing and thinking these people who he doesn't know except in what he types (thanks for the word) from them.

It's not the travel on the bus that I like. It's not the movement from one place to another.

I think it's the waiting.
Dude, you kill with these last lines. It's pure poetry, I love it. Gah, I wish I could better describe my love for this line. It's so powerful and great. Amazing job on this chapter, one of my favorites of yours. Can't wait for more! :)

Author's Response: YAYZ pretty shiny lovely happy review! thank you pat. :)

Reviewer: patster Signed
Date: January 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Theme 24: Dream(s)

Sarah, I love this. Especailly the part about Shawn never having had a job long enough to call in sick. It's a good ending line too. Keep the project up girl, it's going great!!

Author's Response: Yay ending lines and self-imposed projects! Thank you for your review, Pat :) Glad you loved it. (You can guess that I'm gleeing right now.)

Reviewer: patster Signed
Date: January 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Theme 25: All That I Have

Aw, this was great Sarah. I love how you brought the pet baptism back, that had me rolling. Seeing Shawn's childlike excitement is so great, and you described it very well. It's also hilarious that Shawn was so paranoid about someone stealing his NES, I love it. A real awwwwwwww ending too, very cute. Loved it Sarah! :)

Author's Response: Thanks Pat! Also, thank you for putting up with my horrid indecision. It really is a problem. also, I spent a good five minutes debating whether or not to keep pet baptism, so I'm glad you liked that one. :)

Summary: This is my response to the forum Weekly 100 Word fic challenge.
Categories: Pre-season, Season, Post-season
Characters: Buzz, Gus, Henry, Juliet, Karen, Lassiter, Other
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Fluff, General, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Missing Scene
Warnings: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5933 Read Count: 76133
[Report This] Published: August 17, 2008 Updated: January 19, 2011
Reviewer: patster Signed
Date: November 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Juliet Feels Guilty

JULES! As far as Shawn is concerned, that's the ultimate insult. *huggles Shawn*

*Shawn sniffles*

It's gonna be okay buddy. It's gonna be okay. :P Great chapter!

Author's Response: LOL! Yeah....I couldn't resist this one. It really just kind of wrote itself.

Reviewer: patster Signed
Date: November 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Dead As A Doornail

BAMBI'S MOM! NO! LOL. But it was actually a buck. *giggle* I'm begining to understand why Shawn didn't become a vet. Nice one!

Reviewer: patster Signed
Date: November 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Are You Nervous?

Nice one CK! =D

Reviewer: patster Signed
Date: December 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Henry Doesn't Yell

LOL! Poor confused Shawn. And I just wanted to pinch Gus's cheeks in this one, he was so cute. I always find it nice when Henry teaches a life lesson of sorts to Shawn and this was no exception. Great job CK! :)