Date: April 11, 2007 11:24 pm Title: Magical Mystery Tour
What the heck? Is that last line a threat? What is going on here? Update por favor!!
Date: April 11, 2007 11:19 pm Title: A Day in the Life
Hm, I wonder what happened to her. Did that evil receptionist know anything and not tell??
Date: April 11, 2007 11:16 pm Title: Penny Lane is in my Heart
Nice flashback and beginning. The case sounds cool.





Date: January 28, 2007 8:58 pm Title: Magical Mystery Tour
Can't wait to see what happens next!!





Date: August 26, 2006 6:41 pm Title: Magical Mystery Tour
Hmm... Interesting! Great job and keep going! I wanna know what's going on. Oh, and:
“I never assume,” Shawn said. “I conclude.”
That was a great line. Very good and very Shawn. :)




Date: August 21, 2006 11:41 pm Title: A Day in the Life
Great start! I'm interested. :) Can't wait for more. Keep up the great work!




Date: August 20, 2006 8:10 pm Title: A Day in the Life
Excellent!





Date: August 20, 2006 2:12 am Title: Penny Lane is in my Heart
ooh... burn... poor Shawn, for once he's not the one with the hot chick! hehe... i like! please continue!
Author's Response: Thank you! This is the first fanfic I have ever posted, and you are my first review. I feel encouraged. :D