Date: July 04, 2023 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
The slope unblocked to feature a massive area of green structures surrounded by our ball as it goes descent down the slope. The green ball is determined to take on a risky route with several components. In each section of the road, your ball will be in the process of undergoing various tests.
Slope unblocked is a game in which you manipulate a green ball. In the beginning, the ball will move along slopes gradually. As you advance, your speed will increase slowly. You must be vigilant and fast to respond if you want to avoid becoming detached from the 3D reality.
Date: June 12, 2023 2:45 am Title: Chapter 1
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Date: May 29, 2018 1:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Ohhh, nice! I mean Shawn got truly *pistol whipped* and they brushed past it like no big deal on the show (especially after he nearly collapses) so it's always cool to read fics like this. Yours was spot on too so I love it.
Date: April 16, 2009 4:51 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved this. It was... perfect! =)
[Report This]Date: March 23, 2009 6:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
One of the best tags to that episode that I've read. Loved it.
[Report This]Date: February 19, 2009 5:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
I couldn't help myself but read this again for the third or fourth time :) I love this.
[Report This]Date: January 26, 2009 4:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really love the feeling of this story. I love Gus's evaluation of Shawn's apartment and even his own. Kudos to the Chips reference as well. I also love the idea that Gus is the one to make sure Shawn stays awake and is going to be ok. That he would sacrifice his time to take care of his best friend. Realizing that he could have lost him. Awesome job on this. I loved every bit of it.
Date: January 20, 2009 7:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love how we get to see the aftermath of Shawn's injuries, and how you show that he's not just going to be automatically okay after all that he went through. It's going to take time for him to heal, and it won't come without pain, but he will heal. I think that's a wonderful theme for this story, and I loved it.
Gus doesn’t say Something is wrong. I loved this line! I love that he knows, and Shawn knows, that there's something wrong, but it isn't acknowledged. Because doing something about it would be admitting that something is wrong, and there being something wrong with Shawn would just be too heartbreaking. So they pretend that everything's alright. This line is so human in that they're both denying anything is wrong in the hopes that it will just pass. I love that you really get me to think with some of these lines, and it's such a powerful line. LOVE IT!
I love how at the end you have Shawn automatically saying that he's fine. That's such a Shawn thing, such a human thing, to do. That Shawn just can't show his emotions, and pays for it by suffering inside himself is so sad. And that he's still denying that anything is wrong, because he needs to stay strong for whatever reason his Big Fat Hero Brain gives him, is so Shawn-like, and I'm in awe of it. And then you follow it up with, "I'll be fine," where Shawn is finally acknowledging his pain, and actually speaking outloud about it, and willing to admit that not everything is okay, but that it will be. I love this SO HARD, because it's so SHAWN and it's so REAL, and it's AWESOME. <3
I love where Shawn tells Gus that he could have died that day. Again, it's Shawn taking the steps to acknowledge his pain, even though it's not easy. And it's not easy for gus either, who is as you say so beautifully, choking on Shawn's words, and the fact that, yes, Shawn could have died. But he didn't. And that's what matters now. GUH, amazing scene between them, LOVE LOVE LOVE it.
Man Pete, this was a truly amazing tag, and I loved it like WOAHS. Amazing job! <3
Date: January 20, 2009 5:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this one DEFINITELY works for me - it's the ep coda I've been wanting to see, actually, with a look at the aftereffects of concussion and near death and such. Lovely.
Date: January 20, 2009 12:25 am Title: Chapter 1
I liked this episode extension a lot! I wish that we had seen a little further into Shawn's head injury than the episode let on..it switched scenes from Shawn stumbling, seemingly concussed, to him flutting around the station as usual without a hint of a bruise on his cheek, and that frustrated me. But anyway, great job with this! I really wish it had actually been in the episode!!