[Report This]Date: August 27, 2012 12:34 pm Title: Epilogue
I love the Shawn and Gus banter:) At least it was only a flesh wound! Very interesting twist at the end with both of the men being at the warehouse.
Date: April 18, 2012 1:52 pm Title: Epilogue
ALAS, you finish! And what a great "Psych" ending too :D
Author's Response: I know! Finally, there's an ending! Thank you so much for your support and your reviews :) Glad you've enjoyed it!! Xo
[Report This]Date: April 18, 2012 10:19 am Title: Epilogue
Spencer! I actually cheered when I saw you posted another chapter - and then cried when I realized it was the LAST one! But then I cheered again when I saw your dedication!! You absolutely didn't have to do that - I have thoroughly loved this story and HAD to tell you about that love with each and every chapter. I had no choice - I simply adore the humor in this story. I've said it before and I'll say it again - the characters are ridiculously SPOT ON! It reads exactly like a Psych episode.
There was another OJ-spitting incident when I read:
"Dude, stare all you want. I'll never go out with you."
And then Gus' response! GAH!!!!
PERFECT ENDING!!!
Thank you so much for writing this. Now, I can only assume you're working on your next masterpiece - can't wait to read it!
-JR
Author's Response: How did I never respond to this?? I'm so terrible :0) ....Yes, sadly this story had to end. Your loyalness deserved to see this fic finished. You motivated me throughout the entire fic and I'm so happy that I've made you smile/laugh with this fic. Thank you so much for all of your support :)
And I may have another one cooking up. We'll see if I actually post it lol ;)
Date: March 13, 2012 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 14
Okay. :D I REALLY want to see them film this one. :D Awesome! :D
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!! :) That is so awesome of you to say! <3
[Report This]Date: December 11, 2011 9:40 am Title: Chapter 1
First, this was a good story! Very entertaining and you are very good at writing the comedic banter that I love in Psych. There were a few grammatical and spelling issues, however, that caused me to pass over this story a few times before I finally decided to read it (and I would have missed out if I hadn't read it!) in the title, as well as a couple places in the story, you use the word "murder" when talking about a person who murders--a "murderER". There were a few other places in the story where the use of plurals were a problem (for example: "There's many..." when it should be "There're many...")
Please don't take this the wrong way; I really liked the story. I'm just trying to offer a little constructive criticism. Your characterizations were spot-on, which is the most important element to me. The case itself was also intriguing. I will definitely take a look at your other stories now. Thanks for a fun read.
Author's Response: Thank you for your input, Katie! I appreciate you taking the time to read this through and giving me the constructive criticism. I'll definitely be a lot more careful with the grammer from here on out. This was honestly one of the first fics I've written, so I was a bit hasty in posting when I should've spent more time on editing. I'm glad that you were able to look past my mistakes and enjoy it. :)
Date: December 10, 2011 6:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved the missing shoe at the end. lol Just a bit of info...paramedics don't do stitches (unless protocols have changed in recent years). That's something a PA or doctor would do in an ER or clinic. :-)
Author's Response: Thank you! And I knew I forgot something! I had meant to mention the fact about the stitches (theater they are only given in a hospital) but I posted at around 3am so it slipped my mind. I had the paramedic do them because it fit my story. I'll add that into the story notes the next time I update!
[Report This]Date: December 10, 2011 6:59 am Title: Chapter 14
Spence, my friend, your humor is so ridiculously spot on! I can see everything in my mind's eye and visualize it as if I was watching an episode (and epic season 1-3 episode...) of Psych. I LOVE you for that!!!
The way you wrote Shawn's thoughts to Jason's taunts was just perfect at the beginning.
"Sharing is caring..." Heehee!
I nearly spit my OJ all over the place reading the 'kerchief exchange. You completely NAILED Shawn and Gus here!!!!!!
And then that scene in the ambulance!!!! GAH! Another PERFECT depiction! This chapter was one of my favorites so far (and that's saying a lot because I'm in love with this entire story).
Iffy on the end of the chapter!? WHAT!?
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much JR! I'm truely honored that you compared my humor to the first few seasons of Psych because those were the only seasons that I feel had any true comedy. They were filled with epic humor, so I love you for THAT. :) I'm happy to see that you mentioned the 'kerchief exchange because that had been removed and added back in last minute. This was honestly my favorite as well, so it makes me extremely happy that you enjoyed of so much. :D Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: December 10, 2011 6:24 am Title: Chapter 14
AN UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!!! :D
I'm truly in love with your story! You really keep the element of humour as consistant as they do in the show!
And on that note, I WANT MORE!!! :D
[Report This]Date: December 01, 2011 8:56 am Title: Chapter 13
What an AWESOME gift!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving and I'm sorry it took me so long to find you had updated this!!!!!! No matter, I'm SO EXCITED you have updated this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can I stop using so many exclamations points!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anyhoo, onto the review (! - hee hee, needed one more).
(Quick little thing: the treasure is spelled Bouchard's :))
Heehee - love the dust contamination, Shawn's tingles, etc. I can see him wanting to jump up and down, but he'd probably drop his phone if he did that. :)
Chafed cheek... :)
"Luckily, I have the supernatural on my side and together we have come up with a theory." Loved this line!
"‘Get to the point, Spencer. We're not getting any younger, here.' Hold on to your granny-panties, Lassie Lu." This was !@#@$$% hysterical!
"I know, I'm disappointed, too. I'm normally more of an ‘80s pop culture kinda man myself, but it was Dad's turn to pick the movie and he has a bit of a man-crush on Clint Eastwood." This was even more !@#$%$^^%$% hysterical!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (There I go with the exclamation points again! Gah! I can't stop!)
"What if I said that there are two detectives, one gangly officer, and a pharmaceutical salesman?" and then "Chuck Norris with a BB Gun?" which threw off Creed - A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This made me laugh so hard!
By the way, you are rocking the mystery/case as well!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And you can't end it there! Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yay, you found it! It's your reviews that I look forward to reading the most :) Your exclamation points made me laugh so hard lol. And thanks for the tip about Bouchard's name. I tried to look it up and that was the spelling that I found. I fixed it! ;) You touched on all my favorite points of the chapter! The Clint Eastwood and Chuck Norris lines were what I wrote this entire fic for. It sounds silly, I know, but I saw this scene in my head and I had to put it on paper. It only took me two years to get to it! ;) The rest was just some silly fun. Thanks so much for your continuing support. I appreciate it so much.
Date: November 28, 2011 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 13
No! No! NO!! HURRY AND UPDATE! I'm anxious like crazy here!
Author's Response: Don't we all love a cliffie? ;)
I'll have the next chapter up soon, this week for sure.
Thank you!