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Reviewer: PineappleHead Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2024 10:26 am Title: "Take me home."

I *love* this idea, omg. XDD

Reviewer: insert56 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2024 8:55 am Title: "Take me home."

awww lol very Shawn-like :D

Reviewer: Syncop8ed Rhythm Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26, 2024 11:54 am Title: "Talk to me."

Ooooh! This was fantastic! Full of suspense and my heart broke at the "He didn't even have a chance to call Mar-" line. Also, the way it cut off made me think the bomb went off! (Thank pineapple goodness it didn't!) In my head, they're both a little bruised and riding an adrenaline rush, but otherwise okay. *fingers crossed*

Reviewer: PineappleHead Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23, 2024 1:49 pm Title: "Talk to me."

Agggggghhhhhhhh!!!!!! Talk about suspense!!

Reviewer: insert56 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23, 2024 3:47 am Title: "Talk to me."

!!!!!!!!!

What's with our group and blowing them up? XD

I kid, I kid. Lovely angst!!!

I always love your writing.

Reviewer: Syncop8ed Rhythm Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2024 8:46 pm Title: “I’m up to the challenge."

Oh, those are famous last words! :P This was so cute!!

Author's Response: The most famous. XD Thank you!

Reviewer: PineappleHead Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2024 3:09 pm Title: “I’m up to the challenge."

Ba ha ha!! This is so cute! And, of course something is gonna go terribly wrong here! XD

Author's Response: Oh of course it is. lol Thank you! Glad you enjoyed.

Reviewer: cosette141 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2024 1:24 am Title: “I’m up to the challenge."

THIS CAN ONLY END BADLY AHAHA omg this is so Shawn I LOVE it!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: insert56 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2024 4:01 am Title: “I’m up to the challenge."

awwww my baby boys! i love this! gah I always forget how short 100 words is! great one, Deej!

Author's Response: It really is much too short. lol Thank you!

Reviewer: PineappleHead Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20, 2019 9:45 am Title: Surprised

This is amazing, Deej! I love the way you have Lassiter's thoughts & side comments in parentheses all through the story. That's a really effective way to get Lassie's commentary into the story, and it's really creative. I also love the way you always capture Lassie so perfectly. Favorite line: "Lassiter called it disobeying an order to stay put." :-D

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

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