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Reviewer: Mrs-N-Uzumaki Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2012 9:21 am Title: Chapter 7: Shirts

"Are you sure you don't mean it's what all the guys who could break a hip are wearing this year?"

LOOOOL! BRILLIANT!!! And the moment when Henry walks in with the same shirt was just priceless XD

PLEASE DO MORE!!! Henry/Shawn moments is what I always looks forward to in Psych!

Reviewer: Mrs-N-Uzumaki Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2012 9:17 am Title: Called to the Office

Shawn leaned back in the chair. He crossed his arms, unaware that he was mimicking his father, and closed his mouth into a tight frown.  LOVE it! I live for moments of "like father, like son".

ANd FINALLY a little story where Henry backs him up! Henry may be a hard-ass most of the time but he stills tries to be a good father (well...his definition of being a good father anyway).

Reviewer: Mrs-N-Uzumaki Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2012 8:40 am Title: Chapter 3: Weird Things that Your Father Asks You to Do

"Oh yes, let's all be practical. Plus, think of all the fun I'll have picturing him in caskets. Maybe I should get him to lay in one and see if it looks good on him." Awww Shawn! XD "Why is this weirding you out so much?" Gus asked him. Really Gus? Beause planning for your parent's death in advance is totally normal when they're still healthy enough to live 20 years! 

"Is your son seeing anyone?" Henry's smile fell. LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLL!!!! Serves Henry right for scaring Shawn like that XD

Reviewer: Mrs-N-Uzumaki Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2012 7:45 am Title: Chapter 1: The Talk

"Oh no, who died?" Shawn asked.  LOOOOOOOOOOL!!

Oh the torture!! I'm so glad I didn't have to have 'the talk' with my parents!

Reviewer: patster Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2008 9:42 pm Title: Chapter 7: Shirts

LOL! I love that Shawn was unconsiously mimicking Henry. May I add that the first chapter was pure.... Awkward. You could totally do something where the "Tooth Fairy" comes. I could see that getting awkward once Shawn realizes that Henry is the one collecting his teeth. Anyway, I love awkwardness, keep it coming!

Reviewer: Velliana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2008 6:11 pm Title: Called to the Office

Awwww, that got me all teary-eyed, seriously! Great work!

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Date: June 07, 2008 6:05 pm Title: Chapter 5: Trust

Nice work! 

Author's Response:

Thanks.

Reviewer: Velliana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2008 5:50 pm Title: Chapter 3: Weird Things that Your Father Asks You to Do

Hahaha! This was GREAT! and my favorite line:

Henry smiled at his son's concerned voice. "I just want to make sure that it is all in order. If I leave it to you, lord knows what I'll get. Showgirls, marching bands, parades, floats." Henry said trying to lighten the mood.

"Oh yes. It would be just like Mardi Gras.

:picks self up off of the floor and calms down:  That is sooooo them! 



Author's Response: Wow, you can't give a bigger compliment than that.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: eightiswild Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2008 5:11 am Title: Chapter 4: Don't Ask What's For Dinner

Awwwwwww! Cute


Author's Response: Thanks, sometimes happier thoughts are better.

Reviewer: eightiswild Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2008 4:55 am Title: Chapter 3: Weird Things that Your Father Asks You to Do

-rolls on the floor literally- OHMIGOSH!! That's the best! Never saw it comin!


Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  My mind works in weird ways.

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