Date: December 06, 2023 5:53 am Title: Chapter 1
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[Report This]Date: August 09, 2012 9:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
I want to see Gus' reaction.
[Report This]Date: September 09, 2010 11:56 am Title: Epilogue
Wow! I found this story again and I couldn't believe I hadn't reviewed it before to say how AWESOME it is!! :D I LOVE it!! And the end is really funny. Great, great story!! :D
Date: July 12, 2010 5:23 pm Title: Epilogue
this story was great! I loved it and the witty banter was great. It felt like it had the spirit of the show. Great job!!
[Report This]Date: July 03, 2010 2:01 am Title: Epilogue
LOL! This chapter was priceless, I love it! And you know, as much as Shawn has always been against being a detective I think that he would absolutely love showing off a badge to everyone he meets!
So...anything after this? Prequel? Maybe a one-shot or something telling a little bit about where Shawn's been? Or maybe just another story :) I loved this! Thanks for a great read!
[Report This]Date: July 03, 2010 2:00 am Title: Chapter 4
I love how Shawn and Gus' friendship fit so nicely into this story even though they had been apart for so long. I think that would be very true to them, and honestly it made me think of my own situation with friends that I haven't talked to in a long time. I would hope that we would be able to still remain just as close :/
Anyway!
“So he has no idea who this anonymous caller is?” Gus spoke up.
“Dude, he’s anonymous.” Shawn responded.
Lol!!
And I really loved the scene between Shawn and his dad. Great sense of characterization!
[Report This]Date: July 03, 2010 1:58 am Title: Chapter 3
I LOVED the banter at the beginning! So cute!
“Firstly: say it don’t spray it"
LOL! You're my hero! I forgot all about that saying!
[Report This]Date: July 03, 2010 1:57 am Title: Chapter 2
“key word: asked. Besides that guy has horrible hair.”
your dialogue is spot on! It makes this story so much fun to read!
[Report This]Date: July 03, 2010 1:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Classy ending, loved it!
Date: July 02, 2010 11:46 pm Title: Epilogue
I loved this story very much! :D All of it was very in character, even poor stressing Chief. Loved the ending, too. Sequel, please? C: