[Report This]Date: October 27, 2007 6:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
I thought this was a cute story. If only Lassie came like two minutes later, poor Shawn. He never seems to be able to find the right time. Well it will happen sooner or later.
Author's Response: Thanks. I hope you're right about it happening sooner or later. The writers need to throw us a bone a little more often. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: October 18, 2007 7:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww! cutez!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Night Writer. They needed to have an argument.
Date: October 04, 2007 4:56 am Title: Chapter 1
HAHAHAHAHAHA. Good WORD, just the thought of Juliet and Shawn having an argument is hilarious. I shouldn't laugh at their pain, but they're so pathetically adorable.
He lifted his arm and draped it around Juliet’s shoulders pulling her closer. "For warmth," he explained at her look. "It’s going to get chilly tonight."
Oh Shawn. You not-sly-at-all-dog. And Juliet's just like "fiiiiine, I'll buy it. Moron." And he just grins and grins and grins, because he KNOWS.
"Beside, I think you like arguing with your dad," Juliet moved forward slightly.
"I like arguing with you," he whispered his lips barely brushing hers.
He so does! I don't think he'd know what to do with his dad if they didn't argue. And I rather think he likes making ou-up with Juliet. Arguing seems to be working in his favor.
And Lassie! He's all DON'T WANNA KNOW DON'T TALK TO ME SOMETHING SCARRING AND DISGUSTING WAS GOING ON IN HERE AND I DON'T. WANT. TO KNOW.
hahahaha. Poor guy, he finally has something to make fun of Shawn for, and I'm pretty sure that Shawn doesn't care. Juliet stole Lassie's thunder *huge smirk*
Author's Response:
It's about time they had a good argument. And a good make "up" session is really what they need. *grins* He thinks he's smooth, but Jules knows what's really going on. Can't you just see Lassie walking in to that? He would be completely grossed out. And Shawn would probably figure out a way to turn any teasing back around on Lassie. Thank you for the awesome review and for taking the time to write it, I really love reviews.
Date: October 04, 2007 3:41 am Title: Chapter 1
That was quite sweet. I rather wish Lassie hadn't interrupted them, haha, but that line about the chief withholding the marshmallows is gold. You're absolutely right about Shawn and his dad, I think he really did look up to him (and still does to a degree, cuz why else would he keep coming to him for help?), but couldn't get past the flaws he saw later on. Anyhow... good stuff!
Author's Response: Thanks, deMona. I guess the next time Lassie is going to have to get his nose out. lol You are absolutely right about Shawn still going to his dad for help. You can still love and respect someone, but see past their flaws. Thanks so much for reviewing.
Date: October 04, 2007 3:10 am Title: Chapter 1
So cute! I loved that Shawn and Juliet actually had an argument. That's something we hardly ever see. I love how they resolved it, too. Adorable.
Author's Response: Awwww, Thanks, mel. I know, wouldn't you just love to see them really go at it, then make up, of course. The resolution is the best part of an argument. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: October 03, 2007 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Are you kidding me? I loved my parents as a kid. Then after a messy and slightly violent divorce and a bunch of other messes at age seven, I hated them! And I still do, come to think of it.
Anyway, I LOVED this fic. Really, I do! And I also love how they were really only 30 feet from the woods all along. :D Please keep up the great work and write more! This fic is AWESOME!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
Date: October 03, 2007 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Too cute! I love Lassiter's reason for coming on the retreat. Heh heh! And I loved the arguing between Jules and Shawn.
Author's Response:
For roasted marshmallows I might even go sleep in the woods. Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to review as well.
Date: October 03, 2007 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
okay, i'm confused, is this a multi-chapter fan fic.....or is it an original oneshot that you'll be forced to turn into a multichapter fic eventually?
great story though ;)
Author's Response: Probably the second. Except I don't write too many multi-chapter fics. I was just telling Jenn1984 that those take time and will power and talent and I am lacking in all three. lol Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you liked it.
Date: October 03, 2007 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, this is über cute >_< You did a great job! xD *favorites*
Author's Response: Hey Juliet, thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I enjoyed writing it. Thanks for leaving a review.
Date: October 03, 2007 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
t'was cool..me like..hehe 30 ft from camp...ye i think he did look up to henry...maybe still does but is just too angry at him
Author's Response: Thanks, sas. It could be anger, you have a good point there. Can't they just get along? Thanks for the review.