[Report This]Date: August 15, 2018 4:11 am Title: Chapter 14
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OMGSHAWNANDGUSANDTHISWHOLETHINGWASSOFREAKINGUNREALANDPERFEXTANDHOLYHELLHOWDOYOUWRITELIKETHATANDGOODLORDMYINNERFANGIRLANDWRITERSELFCANTCONTAINITSELFNORCANITEXPLAINJUSTHOWMUCHIFLIPPINGLOCEDTHIS.IJUSTCANT.
*clears throat*
Okay, but seriously, this is literally one of the best fics I had read in the history of ever-- and I've read thousands in the last 7 years.... (No exaggeration).
For one, my mind is blown at how you kept this so entertaining the whole way through. It never felt dry or boring, yet you explained everything in prefect detail. And it didn't feel too quick paced either. It was perfect. Your pacing is so unreal, I'm jealous.
Your characters are so on point!! I left feeling like a script writer wrote this because of how on point they all are. I also came away feeling like I actually knew Danny and Mac and Jimmy, holy hell.
I'm a sucker for whump, but you didn't add so much so that it was unrealistic/over exaggerated. Again... Perfection.
There were many turns that I didn't see any I loved being as kept on my toes as Shawn and Gus were.
I loved seeing both sides to the story, it gave it a wonderful balance.
Also, the way you dealed with their emotions was really intuitive and fantastic.
I wish I had fancier words to review this with to truly express how much I loved it. I wish I was good at reviews. Because this is seriously a work of art right here...
Congrats, I'm in love with your writing XD
Date: August 15, 2018 3:51 am Title: Chapter 13
Oh mmmm gee how do you manage to write every single character so on point and in character?! It's outstanding, holy crap!!!
All of this, especially the part with Maddie was soooo good
Date: August 15, 2018 3:41 am Title: Chapter 12
Oh my God can I say I completely love the hole interaction with Winner and Shawn and her being the one to convince him to get looked at?
Also, OMG! Maddie...
Date: August 15, 2018 3:30 am Title: Chapter 11
ASDFGHJKLASDFGHJKL IS ALL I CAN SAY
Date: August 15, 2018 2:56 am Title: Chapter 9
MY GOD this fic just keep getting better and better holy heck.
Also, oh my God, did you really just shoot Gus XD
Date: August 15, 2018 2:28 am Title: Chapter 8
OH COME ON WHAT KIND OF CHAPTER ENDING WAS THAT
Date: August 14, 2018 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 6
Ahhhhh do it Shaaaaaaawnnnnnn
[Report This]Date: August 14, 2018 8:34 pm Title: Chapter 14
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This is one of the best hostage stories I have read in a LONG time and now I will tell you why:
A) You actually went into the lives of the hostage takers, and that I thank you for sooooooo much~ It's awesome when they're not just random dudes taking people because why not?
2) FLIPPIN' EMOTIONS (both mine and the characters'). So often you see the same turn of events with these stories, and nothing new to flesh them out, but MAN, I'll be darned if you didn't seriously tug some heartstrings there! It was the little things, you know? FINALLY someone included the Gusters (THANK YOU), and having the villains with their own conflicting emotions and friend group, and Shawn TELLING Gus to stop bleeding because mess because that's the only way he could think for Gus to *get it* right then *screams into pillow*
And Henry and Maddie *starts crying all over again*
Oh, and of course, there's the actual thinking behind everything~ The way each character calculated (and occasionally misjudged) other character's movements so SOOOOOO nice to see, because usually there will be trying and failing to escape and it'll be whatever - no. Not this time. I mean, they DO do that, but it's CALCULATED. Does that make sense? XD It was just nice to see reasoning behind everyone reacting how they reacted. AND OMG DANNY IS SO CHILLING THOUGH *whispers* Best bad guy everrrrrr
I think the list got ditched somewhere *peers back over shoulder* Ehhh, well. XD This review is pretty long now . . . just, high fives to you, you did the the bestest job =D
Date: August 14, 2018 7:18 pm Title: Chapter 4
OH CRAP.
I wonder how much them knowing who they are will change things. A lot, I imagine.
Date: August 14, 2018 6:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh man I like literally can't even comprehend how amazing this is-- like, HOW? XD
Poor Gus with the corn syrup and red dye #3.