You must login () to review.
Reviewer: DinerGuy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30, 2010 12:37 am Title: Chapter 1

So I did read this when you sent it in, but I thought it deserved an actual review. So here you are. I'll do my best to replicate my original thoughts. ;)

Bahaha "The punch is what?"

"I stopped listening around year 3." Oh Gus.

"Let's hope the first one he attacks is Gus." lol Gus and Shawn fighting over who was in front when Lassie arrived.

"He's having a nice holiday with his 9 mm. He likes to clean it excessively, over and over." *ded*

And Lassie going to dinner to spite Shawn? Haha Awesome!

Shawn and Lassie's bantering at the table was just great.

Aw, Shawn bought Lassie a Christmas present. A thoughtful Christmas present that didn't involve a snow globe.

Great ending. I love the friendship that you brought into the Shawn/Lassiter relationship. Compared to Shawn deciding he was an enemy, I think it's a vast improvement. :)

I loved this fic; great job!!


Author's Response:

Aw, Thanks Deej =] I had a lot of fun writing this so I'm glad to see you had fun reading it. 

I'm happy too see you liked it so much. And you happened to point out all of my favorites =D I also like the little break down of what you liked about it. It helps me a great deal =]

Reviewer: thekk Signed [Report This]
Date: December 24, 2010 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awww, this makes me happy. :) I really loved the Christmas poem! haha

Author's Response:

Aw thank you. =]

I'm glad you liked it! I had a lot of fun writing the poem so I'm happy that you enjoyed it =D

You must login () to review.