Date: January 11, 2012 7:42 am Title: Part 1 of 1
Why oh WHY didn't they conclude this little argument in the show?
You did an excellent job in capturing these two. Especially the parts where Shawn contemplates the fact that he hates and loves his father at the same time and can't understand why. Henry should be feeling guilty and it was wrong of him to get his son's most treasured posession into the impound after he knew how much he loved that bike, but I can understand why he had done what he did, and the way you put Henry's frustration of the entire situation into words almost justifies why he did it. Almost.
Once again, I applaud you :)
Date: February 17, 2009 3:59 pm Title: Part 1 of 1
Ah, what a nicely written add-on~
I especially enjoyed how you described not only Shawn's feelings, but Henry's feelings as well; it's nice to take a look into Henry's head every once-in-awhile to see his emotions.
Great job. :3
[Report This]Date: October 17, 2007 10:23 pm Title: Part 1 of 1
Very good!!!! I loved it! You are truly a gifted writer!!
[Report This]Date: May 08, 2007 4:27 am Title: Part 1 of 1
*sigh* I love this. I really do. I love getting to see into Shawn and Henry's minds. They're just so darn...augh. I don't even know a word to describe them. I looooove their relationship though, and watching it grow and change and seeing them go through stuff like this is so cool.
Love this extention of that Super-Awesome-Amazing Scene. You really nailed it. :D
Date: April 10, 2007 9:34 pm Title: Part 1 of 1
Aw, that's sad! It works really well though. I like it!
Date: March 28, 2007 4:05 am Title: Part 1 of 1
Good job. I can actually see that happening! ;)
Date: March 09, 2007 4:10 am Title: Part 1 of 1
This was an excellent story. I especially love the ending. Great job!
[Report This]Date: February 16, 2007 10:17 am Title: Part 1 of 1
This was really good. I like how you showed how henry truly cares about his son and how shawn still loves his dad even after everything that has happened. great story, keep writing!
[Report This]Date: February 15, 2007 4:23 pm Title: Part 1 of 1
this story was so good and i love the way you incorporated the scene into it! i loved the way you talked about Henry and how he could order Shawn around and stuff but couldn't really talk to him, because that seems exactly the way Henry feels in the show. If there was a rating over 10 i would defintely give it to you!
[Report This]Date: February 15, 2007 12:45 pm Title: Part 1 of 1
Wow...this is amazing! :D I loved how you added more to this particular scene. You are really good at this and I hope you write some more additional scenes and stories in general.