Date: August 28, 2013 4:31 am Title: Epilogue
What a touching epilogue. So tragic that he lost Juliet, and interesting to see an alternative universe where Juliet is dead. Love the idea of Shawn eventually going through the police academy and becoming a detective in Juliet's memory.
It is great, and quite ironic to see him meeting anther girl the night he would have broken up with Juliet. Makes me wonder if he would be happier, and better paired with someone else who might understand him and his motivations for doing things a bit better? Maybe someone whose morals aren't as black and white as Juliet's?
Date: August 27, 2013 3:23 pm Title: One Moment
You should write one last chapter about how everyone reacted to Shawn's death. That was mindblowing, by the way.
Author's Response: I've been super booked with school and blah.
I will finish it tonight!
[Report This]Date: April 29, 2013 2:57 pm Title: Talking Won't Help
I should login and favorite this story. 'Cos I like it THAT much WOW
[Report This]Date: April 29, 2013 11:44 am Title: What If's
AW. That was beautifully sad. You are awesome at descriptions.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. I love when a story puts you in the moment and makes you part of the world. If you like this story, feel free to check out my other three stories. If you do, please let me know what you think.
[Report This]Date: April 25, 2013 4:20 pm Title: What If's
*starts bawling, grabs pint of Ben & Jerry and tissue* SSOO SSAADD! Thank you for updating. Im REALLY concerned about Shawn
Date: April 25, 2013 4:13 pm Title: What If's
wow that was a very emotional chapter I loved it. good job!
Date: April 25, 2013 3:22 pm Title: That's What She Felt Before She Died
wow that was terrific!!
Date: April 25, 2013 3:01 pm Title: Aftershock
oooh this chapter was awesome. Poor shawns had it with being psychic poor guy
Date: April 25, 2013 2:22 pm Title: Aftermath
Oooh. This is getting really good! Poor Shawn.
[Report This]Date: October 20, 2012 12:45 am Title: That's What She Felt Before She Died
Please please finish this =) It's amazing. Unless that was the closing? Then it still is and will always be mind blowing, heart stoppin incredible. Bravo my fellow Psycho
Author's Response: Oh my goodness, thank you! My heart leapt when I read that, it means a lot to hear that. And no, it's not the end (supposedly). I just have to figure out what to do now. I have an idea, but I've been so stupid busy with school and the sequel to "if only you knew" that I haven't been able to work this story out. But I will get to it.......eventually...