Date: February 16, 2015 2:20 pm Title: Authenic Italian is so Overrated
Sorry to be anal, but I wanted to correct your Italian.
You are very good - Tu sei molto buono.
Police! Come out with your hands up! - Polizia! Vieni fuori con i vostri mani in giro! (I'm not sure about in giro, but the rest I am).
Let the senator's daughter go! - Lasciate andare la figlia del senatore!
Yea, as I said, I'm anal. Good story though!
[Report This]Date: June 25, 2012 3:07 pm Title: Authenic Italian is so Overrated
I can't BELIEVE Shawn was with the Italian Senators DAUGHTER! Ooh! *eyes boggle And last part was great when he mentioned being a sniper. I speak a lttle bit of italian and caught some of this
[Report This]Date: June 24, 2012 1:30 pm Title: Authenic Italian is so Overrated
Wait... Red hair... Green eyes... Sound like my OC O_o Anyway, I love this story. I love how Shawn is hiding his own injuries and helps his Dad with his. Also, I love the jobs Shawn has and how they always end up going wrong XD
Date: May 29, 2012 6:47 pm Title: Authenic Italian is so Overrated
I really like this story. It is such a great idea, and you are doing an awesome job of writing creative stuff that I could just totally picture Shawn doing. I can't wait for the next chapter. THough I read SSS hahah so I was happy to see that done as well :) thanks :) I can't wait to read the sniper one!!! :) but I wish somehow the other people were hearing these stories too eh, Shawn is the best :) and I am so worried and curious about whats wrong with him!! please write me more :)
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2012 9:15 pm Title: Authenic Italian is so Overrated
How did I miss seeing this story earlier?!? I read it all in one sitting and I'm really, really hoping that you will be updating it soon. I love it!!
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2012 4:33 am Title: Authenic Italian is so Overrated
Oh... so... good! And more whump! How I love you...
I think Shawn should.... be a shopping cart wrangler who raced them with his coworkers. Nah... that's lame. lol :)
[Report This]Date: May 22, 2012 11:31 pm Title: Authenic Italian is so Overrated
You're going to leave us there and work on other stories, huh?? Haha, as long as you update something, it's all good. Keep up the good work xP
Date: May 22, 2012 10:42 pm Title: Authenic Italian is so Overrated
Awwww. lol OMG!! Shawn is puking blood!! So what is little miss Awesome going to do?? Leave us with another cliffie. She feeds us these whump filled chapters of bread crumbs for us hungry little whumpahilic birds will follow her around begging for more updates. lol Now you should be looking for the antidote for the jelly fish. Smiles to you too!! Insert smiley face emoticon here