Date: August 14, 2012 8:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm liking the story very much--I love how you have all the characters acting--very true to the show and I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter. When I saw the "Emergency Exit Only" my first thought was wouldn't there be an alarm--if they went out that way? So it seems that Shawn is wrong? But I can't figure out how, so I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Great to hear from you Lucy. You are correct, there SHOULD be an alarm and you will find out in the next chapter. Good catch!
Date: August 14, 2012 2:36 am Title: Chapter 2
Hurray! I can't even tell you how excited I was to see another of your stories! And it doesn't disappoint. Fluffy Shules AND Carlowe plus jumping right into the action plus Shawn interacting with a cute little girl! You're off to a spectacular start! :) Oh, and I love that you used the real mayor's name. The internet, FTW.
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks Becca. I'm glad you're enjoying things so far!