Date: February 14, 2013 5:31 pm Title: Chapter 8
I completely loved this entire series!!! Please write more!
Author's Response: Someday Indra, I'm sure I will. I'm glad you enjoyed the ride and thank you SO much for your review. It means a lot to me!
[Report This]Date: October 13, 2012 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 8
Awww.... such nice Shules at the end. I kind of hate to see this story end because it's so nicely put together and you've clearly put so much thought into the story flow and the series itself. I'll look forward to the next time you can come back and continue with more, and wish you lots of inspiration (and success with your other writing)!
Author's Response: Thanks so much SophieG! I really enjoyed writing the entire series and SOMEday, I will be back. (Currently LOVING the new season!)
[Report This]Date: October 03, 2012 9:20 pm Title: Chapter 7
I hate that Jules was hurt but I love that Shawn help rescue the little girl. A wonderfully written chapter that played out perfectly in my mind. I loved all the detail about the surveillance and that it all fit to make everything believable--story and character. I'm looking forward to the next chapter (even though it's the last).
Author's Response: Thanks Lucy! I had a hard time fitting it all together but I'm glad it worked in the end. Next chapter is coming along.
[Report This]Date: September 16, 2012 2:46 pm Title: Chapter 6
bwahahahaha! evil plans spoiled by facebook. love that.
Author's Response: Heh heh It was a last-minute inspiration. Glad you approve! Thanks for taking the time to review!
Date: September 11, 2012 7:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love this!:)
Author's Response: Good to hear!!
Date: September 11, 2012 1:22 am Title: Chapter 5
The plot thickens! I love how your stories read just like an episode with an extra dose of fluff and awesomeness. Update soon! :)
Author's Response: Thanks Becca! As for updating... Is tomorrow soon enough? Chapter is done but I just have to proof it one last time.
Date: September 06, 2012 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
Omg! This is amazing! My fav parts r with shawn and juliet! Great shules moments... If only this were an episode...
Author's Response: Thanks so much Alexis! Glad you're enjoying it. (And my favorite are Shules moments too)
Date: September 06, 2012 8:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wonderful characterization and I really love the way you write (and I was so happy to see that you updated!) It may have been a short chapter but it moved the plot way forward and I'm going to be on the look out for the next one--the second you post it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Lucy. I've got the next one started. I should have it done soon.
Date: September 06, 2012 2:48 am Title: Chapter 4
I love them all! awkward detective Buzz is SO adorable. And I love it when Lassie and Henry team up!
Author's Response: Well good! I love different team-up's and I'm finding it SO fun to write Buzz. Glad you liked it!
Date: September 01, 2012 9:02 am Title: Chapter 4
I love the Shules, the Marlowe Buzz and the Lassie and Henry. It was a joy to read and I love the fact that you picked the rescue that fit the personalities to perfection: Shawn coming up with a plan (and loved the fact that you had him go through other times as a check list), and Buzz being persuaded as only he would have been--by helping someone. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Next Chapter is coming along. It's always fun to come up with new and creative ways to pair up people or get some of the side-line involved in the story.