Date: August 16, 2012 12:36 am Title: Chapter 3
I totally agree with you on the weekend warriors thing: one of the best scenes in the entire series! God, i'm so happy this is back! Missed the series-definetly one of my favorites!
Author's Response: Great to hear from you! I'm glad to be back too, getting excited for the new season!
[Report This]Date: August 15, 2012 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love this chapter and as I read the part about him recreating the scene I thought it was brilliant and something they very much need to bring back on the show (thank you so much for doing it so wonderfully!) I'm really looking forward to the next chapter--please hurry with an update!!
Author's Response: Thanks Lucy! I'm glad you liked how it turned out!
Date: August 14, 2012 8:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm liking the story very much--I love how you have all the characters acting--very true to the show and I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter. When I saw the "Emergency Exit Only" my first thought was wouldn't there be an alarm--if they went out that way? So it seems that Shawn is wrong? But I can't figure out how, so I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Great to hear from you Lucy. You are correct, there SHOULD be an alarm and you will find out in the next chapter. Good catch!
Date: August 14, 2012 2:36 am Title: Chapter 2
Hurray! I can't even tell you how excited I was to see another of your stories! And it doesn't disappoint. Fluffy Shules AND Carlowe plus jumping right into the action plus Shawn interacting with a cute little girl! You're off to a spectacular start! :) Oh, and I love that you used the real mayor's name. The internet, FTW.
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks Becca. I'm glad you're enjoying things so far!
[Report This]Date: August 11, 2012 12:02 am Title: Chapter 1
It had me smiling constantly. And might I add also very well written :)
Author's Response: Thanks Checkerz! More to come soon!
[Report This]Date: August 10, 2012 8:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
brilliant! update soon!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it Marnie! I'm just proofing and fleshing out Chapter 2 and I'll have it posted soon.