



[Report This]Date: September 21, 2013 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 13
I shouldn't eat and read this story.
Ain't got time fo dat. Ha!!!




[Report This]Date: September 21, 2013 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 12
It goes all the way up to the mayor? Wow. Always wondered why he put Trout in the SBPD. Lol




[Report This]Date: September 21, 2013 6:07 pm Title: Chapter 14
Great story once again. Loved the name you picked for their kid. And it was nice to see Shawn acting like a father toward Avery. There is hope for him yet.




[Report This]Date: September 18, 2013 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 10
This is so cool. The suspense is great and all the nods to the series. Wow.
Author's Response: Thanks for all the reviews! I'm having lots of fun writing these.




[Report This]Date: September 18, 2013 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 7
I finally get to read the rest of this! Love the whole series... And food of the dead... Lol




[Report This]Date: August 29, 2013 7:06 am Title: Chapter 5
Protective Lassie and Shawn!? This chapter had everything! Lol. I think those detectives are in on the thefts too.




[Report This]Date: August 28, 2013 6:43 am Title: Chapter 2
Duct taping Woody's mouth! Awesome.
And getting everyone together... double Awesome.




[Report This]Date: August 28, 2013 6:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Finally get to read this!
Love Shawn and Gus' bromance and poor Lass and Jules. I am sure this is really close to how its gonna be... Minus the preggers Jules though. Lol
Date: August 15, 2013 2:59 pm Title: Chapter 14
Wonderful ending and absolutely love the way you wrote the characters and dialogue--very true to character. Thank you so much for sharing this story with us (I would love it if something like this actually happened in Season 8 ;^)
Author's Response: Your welcome! Thanks so much for the reviews!




[Report This]Date: August 06, 2013 9:13 pm Title: Chapter 11
WOW! I just read this story in one sitting and I have to say you write some of the best comic lines for Shawn I have ever read in any story (love it) and I also love the character of Avery and the Shules and finally the fact that you have Shawn flashing into Henry mode from time to time with her. Love it and I really hope now that you update soon because I need to know how this situation gets solved (and hopefully in a good way with Shawn and Avery safe!)