Date: December 09, 2013 3:12 pm Title: Epilogue
This was great, good job!
I saw that you mentioned before one of the chapters that you did not get reviews for one and I think the only reason this story doesn't have quite as many reviews as it probably should is that it is very case heavy. Reading a case is different than watching it in an episode, so it's a little boring and takes effort to read. This one was pretty elaborate so I think if it was a little lighter on the case stuff (not that it wasn't good case stuff) than people probably would have stuck with the story more.
I enjoyed it! :)
Date: December 09, 2013 2:49 pm Title: Chapter 13
I only figured out that it was Alice like sentences before it was revealed, so that is some solid work from you! Usually the reveal to cases is super obvious.
Date: December 09, 2013 2:38 pm Title: Chapter 12
This is getting stressful!
Date: December 09, 2013 1:30 am Title: Chapter 10
Holy crap I can't go to bed NOW!!!
Date: December 09, 2013 12:50 am Title: Chapter 7
I'm like falling asleep right now but I really want to get to the end! Haha
Date: December 09, 2013 12:41 am Title: Chapter 6
oh no! This is great so far :)
Date: December 09, 2013 12:09 am Title: Chapter 5
D'AWWWWWWWW :')
Date: December 09, 2013 12:00 am Title: Chapter 4
I like the way you're writing Shawn and Juliet's dynamic, it's pretty realistic compared to the way some people do it.
Date: December 08, 2013 5:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice start. Can't wait to read the rest.
[Report This]Date: September 28, 2013 5:00 pm Title: Epilogue
I HAVE BEEN READING THIS TRILOGY FROM THE START I LOVE IT I LOVE YOU I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO NOW ITS GONE AHHHHH
Author's Response: There will still be some one-shots in this series. Just look for 'Grandpapa Monkey, and More'!