Date: May 14, 2015 4:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was cute and funny. Perfect mix. The part where Lassie said, "no grinches allowed" and then Gus retorted by saying, "So does that mean your not allowed". That just killed me. Bravo
[Report This]Date: December 26, 2014 12:06 am Title: Chapter 1
Okay, this is great. I just want to hug you for writing it. Made. My. Day. :-D
I can't tell you how glad I am that somebody made a Spock cookie!
I love it that Gus was eating them, and everything Lassiter did was completely spot-on in-character. I particularly loved how he tried to "supervise" at first. Perfect! And Juliet was just great, especially with the way she brought up the fruitcake tradition. How very Scottish of her!
Thank you for the great Christmas treat. I enjoyed it very much. :-)
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review. It meant so much to me!
[Report This]Date: December 24, 2014 9:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOL! Oh, this is too good! Welcome back, Tazmy! We missed you! I can really see this in my mind, and just the thought of zombie Santa cookies....
"I sense your brains are yummy!" Comes to mind!
Author's Response: I missed you all, too. I didn't think anyone would remember me. Thank you for the review! It means a lot to me.
Date: December 24, 2014 7:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great job, the dialogue was spot on!
Author's Response: Thanks! Sometimes I can hear their voices and a I just have to write. :)