Date: August 07, 2021 12:59 am Title: Chapter One
I’ve read this before but I loved it again.
[Report This]Date: April 17, 2018 7:54 pm Title: Chapter One
Please ignore the terrible grammar mistakes in my last review, I'm on my little iPad and it's a devil to type on.
[Report This]Date: April 17, 2018 7:52 pm Title: Epilogue
It's been almost exactly two years and I just realized I never posted my full review *FAIL*! I only remembered this story because I was going through old reviews on one of my stories where you though I was in eight grade at the time and you excited that because you were too then I you realized I had said I had wrote the story in eight grand and only recently posted.
ANYWAY, were you in eight grade when you posted this because HOLY HELL. This is better than anything I attempted to write back then, and probably better than me now, and I'm in college...
Shawn Takes a Shot in the Dark is one of my favorite episode. (I think we all know why). So seeing you continue on without was a really great idea and it fit in SO perfectly. You write so amazing, everything is clear and flows so well, and I saw very little to no errors. You think about the details that most people (including me) don't even think about, and that's one of the things that makes stories so much more realistic and pleasant to read.
The whole time I was thinking along with Shawn, how is he going to get out of this mess, what are they going to make him do? How is his dad and Gus not going to figure out something is wrong? I was on the edge of my seat the whole time with everything Shawn was forced to do and say. You thought everything out so well.
There was a short time where I was starting to think there was almost a little bit too much whump and hospitalization, but it actually does seem pretty possible. I guess I'm just not used to it in most stories. My stomach was flipping over every time he got hurt. So many whump scenes are over played and cheesy or sometimes even too detailed to a point where it gets boring, but yours was a perfect medium point.
I think that you also nailed all of the characters pretty well. So many times stories are hard to read because the characters are too OOC, especially Lassie and Henry. But man, you got it!
Are you sure you're not a child of one of the writers of the show?
Anyway, I loved this story the first time I read it and loved it even more the second (or has it been the third?) time. I'm glad you got all of those awards in the last ceremony because you deserve them.
I noticed you haven't posted since 2016. Are you still active? We need more of your talent around here.
Date: May 29, 2017 11:05 pm Title: Chapter One
Why did they decide to wait for the cops to get there?
Date: May 03, 2015 6:25 pm Title: Chapter One
hey new chapter up for CTTE. I sent a yim to ya
Date: April 22, 2015 11:57 pm Title: Important Note
Go for the sequel!
Author's Response: Yeah, it would reflect me badly if I left that loose end...I think I'll see what I can come up with.
[Report This]Date: April 22, 2015 2:03 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Now. I want the epilogue now. lol
I'll put my FULL review at the very end.
Author's Response: I am literally going to post it in a few minutes. And now I can't wait for that review.
Date: April 22, 2015 12:47 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
So sorry to see this story end! Loved your spin on STASITD. Thanks for sharing your gift. Write on!
Author's Response: Thank you :) And I am writing another fic right now, although it is a crossover with White Collar. It's for a challenge. Though you never know, I might think of something else as well :D
Date: April 21, 2015 12:27 am Title: Chapter Sixteen
Ugh!!! Right at the best part. LOL!
Author's Response: Oh. Right. I should probably update this...must've slipped my mind.
Date: April 15, 2015 1:39 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Poor Shawn. I'm glad it is all out in the open and everyone knows why he did what he did!
Write on!
Author's Response: Yeah, I guess that's like the small little bit of relief he gets. Although I feel like the only reason I did it was because of what Shawn was thinking, that Rollins revealed himself to make them feel bad that they thought he was some sort of druggie. So it's slightly happy. But then Rollins comes over with a knife, in front of everyone...yeah, not so much of a win after that. That seems to be a way for him to make them feel worse, but, at the same time, punish Shawn for getting caught.