[Report This]Date: January 18, 2023 7:31 pm Title: Souvenirs (Epilogue)
I absolutely loved it!
it's a lovely written masterpiece, truly keeping the reader on their toes with its action and a real tearjerker, but in a good sense. the characters truly shine through, and it's just amazing (i have no words for how much I loved it!)
PS I really need the story of the "My right thigh, his ribs." knife, otherwise it will eat me up at night
Date: February 05, 2022 2:55 am Title: Having a Stalker - So NOT Awesome!
Oh no
Date: January 02, 2019 11:27 pm Title: Having a Stalker - So NOT Awesome!
I felt the need to come back and apologise for my mean review. I may not like how you portray the characters but you are an extremely talented writer. So, I apologise and I hope you will write another story in the near future that preferably portrays Shawn in a more favorable light. Because I know it would be amazing. I guess I was just frustrated because you are such a good writer and I would rather have a Shawn story than a Lassiter story. Don't get me wrong. I think Lassiter is great. But I prefer Shawn. But to each his (or her) own. Right? Lol.
I think you give a lot of good details in your stories. I've read most of them. And you have a great imagination. I feel you do some really good research and I love how you leave links to check out what your writing about (guns - awesome). I like to see what the writer is talking about if I'm not familiar with something. So overall kudos and I hope to read more from you.
Apologies again.
Date: November 24, 2018 7:44 am Title: Having a Stalker - So NOT Awesome!
P.S. - Lassiter is not like this on the show. And you have Juliet acting like she can barely tolerate Shawn when they are actually friends.
Date: November 24, 2018 7:41 am Title: Souvenirs (Epilogue)
Why do you hate Shawn so much? This story is my least favorite on the site.
[Report This]Date: June 27, 2018 11:45 pm Title: Souvenirs (Epilogue)
I've been holding this in and just really need to get it out: AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Where do I even begin, omg where do I even start?
THIS FIC. ASDFGHJKL.
SO MUCH EVERYTHING.
How the heck do you come up with such an awesome and intricate plot with all of those pieces and clues planted throughout the whole story? It blows my mind.
Is it sad that even though we got Lassie whump I also wanted some more physical Shawn whump? XD
I LOVE BUZZ IN THIS OMG.
I love how even though this deals with a lot of things that weren't on the show, you still managed to keep them character pretty well.
I SO totally thought the wife was going to poison their tea XD
I love Shawn's talk with Lassie and Henry.
OH AND THE AWARD CEREMONY.
AND EVERYTHING. I LOVE IT ALL. OMG.
Author's Response: Hello, and THANK YOU so much for the wonderful review!
By the way, if you love Shawn whump, I highly recommend my story Stir Crazy. I do believe it's my best work. Enjoy Shawn's pain! Ha!
Texasartchck
Date: April 01, 2017 9:36 am Title: Souvenirs (Epilogue)
This was so amazing. A bit too much explanation/exposition at times, but it was probably needed in the end. You wrote these characters so amazingly well, but I especially loved how you wrote Buzz. Relationships between characters really shine in this story, whether it's Shawn/Lassiter, Lassiter/Jules, Gus/Shawn, or Shawn/Henry, be many others you just wrote so amazingly. This was really great, thanks for writing:D
Date: March 06, 2017 11:36 pm Title: Having a Stalker - So NOT Awesome!
Thanks for re-posting! (And for the heads up) I look forward to re-reading
Date: March 06, 2017 5:29 pm Title: Souvenirs (Epilogue)
I loved this story! It felt like I was watching an actual episode - it sounded so much like the actual characters. :)
[Report This]Date: March 06, 2017 8:53 am Title: Having a Stalker - So NOT Awesome!
Everything about this is amazing! Your writing style, your portrayal of the characters, your plot, everything! So many things about this made me crack up! The interaction between Shawn and Lassie is flawless :D Keep it up!