[Report This]Date: July 15, 2018 2:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Awww poor little cold and wet Shawn. Although I love how it's just, "Eh, the bikers don't like me at first but I stick around long enough to win them over." The way you wrote it is such an off-hand comment but there's so much there!
LOL I love Eliot's response to Shawn saying his name! Poor boy is probably all nervous because who knows what he's been up to recently and he's not with the Leverage team yet.
Also, just as a little friendly comment, when you write "would of," you're probably looking for "would've." They sound the same, but "would've" is the contraction for "would have," which is what you're writing here. ;)
Aww and Eliot being nice about Henry and Maddie. My heart!! :) And you know, you're right. The Spencer boys are both kind of in the same boat with not doing what their dads wanted.
*claps* This was everything I hoped it would be, and it was so fuuunnnn!!! Thank you for writing it! So much love!! < 3
Date: July 14, 2018 3:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love that little detail at the beginning of Shawn needing to get "actual" sleep. :-D
Nice detail in the description of the feel of the air conditioner and his wet hair.
I love it that Eliot was so surprised to see Shawn doing his jive thing as a biker, and I also loved his reaction to Henry's divorce. I also thought that the interactions between him and Shawn were very realistic and believable, with the way that they're trying to reconnect, but there's still so much distance between them.
This was a really good story! I actually enjoyed it much more than I thought I would, and I felt like even though I haven't seen Leverage, it doesn't seem like I'm missing out on anything. I actually would really like to read more about these two sometime!
Great job, Mirame!
Date: July 14, 2018 9:43 am Title: Chapter 1
The Collection of Not-Lost Published Leverage fics is officially open! *cuts ribbon*
In all seriousness though, I love this little ficlet =D It just fascinates me so much to have the two of them together in one room - they're so alike in some ways, but so drastically different in others. I kind of want to know what job Eliot was on and I wanna see Shawn when he finds out whatever it REALLY is. XD And I REALLY want them to meet again later in life when Shawn is less edgy and they've BOTH seen and done a lot more~ :P