




Date: December 05, 2020 4:14 am Title: Summertime Sadness
You have Gus down pat. Makes me wonder what Shawn maxed the card out on this time ;)





Date: August 02, 2020 9:03 pm Title: Into the Unknown
Ahhh! Skipps!! This is perfect for the prompt!! I haven't really seen this covered before and I absolutely love it!!





Date: June 23, 2020 9:19 pm Title: Heatwave
Ooh, very awesome use of descriptions! Definitely hooked me and drew me in. Created such a vivid and uncomfortable atmosphere, I felt so bad for her. I like how it starts so dramatically and then builds to the moment where it's revealed what's actually happening.
Date: June 22, 2020 1:29 am Title: Heatwave
I like the way you played with the descriptions. The intensity builds up well through those compounding details for a really nice effect.
For a second there, I thought she was burning alive, so finding out that it was a fever was a really good "aha!" moment for me. :-D
Date: May 02, 2020 7:48 pm Title: Who Are You?
Oh, wow, that was good! I liked the little roller coaster of emotions from sad, to relieved, to "oh my gosh, you can't end it there!" This is so good and I really enjoyed it. Can't wait to see what you do for the next prompt. :)





Date: April 27, 2020 11:46 am Title: Sound of Silence II
Ugh, this one hurt to read. I forgot how emotional this episode was (now I've gotta go back and watch it again, lol). You did such an awesome job of exploring Shawn's thoughts/feelings in this scene, and with such a small word count, that's REALLY impressive. Those final lines are especially heartbreaking. Such a good one-shot. I love it!
Date: April 25, 2020 8:23 pm Title: Sound of Silence
"He missed his partner. He shook his head. No, that wasn't right. She wasn't just his partner anymore, she was his family and he missed his family like hell."
MY. HEART.
Date: April 19, 2020 12:27 pm Title: Lockdown
This is EXACTLY how I'd expect Shawn to react! Awesome job!
And welcome to the challenge! =D
Date: April 19, 2020 10:55 am Title: Lockdown
Awwwwww, that's adorable! And honestly, it's a completely and 100% plausible reaction for Shawn to have during the lockdown. :-D